He would actually be the yondaime shinobi no kami. The rikudo (?) sennin was the 1st, Hashirama Senju was the 2nd and Hiruzen Sarutobi was the 3rd.

How is Hana alive, if Madera killed her. Izangi only goes back a small margin to prevent the users death. So that wouldn't have revived her. Unless Naruto used the Hell Path of the Rinnegan to revive her. However, that wasn't mentioned. So how did she go from dead, to alive again within a few sentences without explanation?

No offence but i read this because you titled it as a romance. It is not. I don't believe Naruto and Hana even say, 'i love you' to one another.

Great story.

update

since this is the last chapter, shouldn't you mark it as complete?

I have to say that the battle with Madara was bland and disappointing, sorry to tell you, but it's the fucking Madara uchiiha, the guy I fought with Hashimara one whole day, seriously, where is the perfect susanno, you know, that with him That cut a whole mountain, or where are the powers of Madara rinnengan or showed, such as the ringo: Hengoku or its shadows, if I even use mokunton, curse this was disappointing, you made Madara look like a wimp.

how the fuck did she survive she was stabbed presumably killed and he fired off a tailed beast bomb those are not presision attacks this is in no way as good as the first few chapters and seems really really half assed sorry but that's my opinion also if its done id put a complete on it

sasuke uchiha you are under arrest for the muer of kiba inuzuka you have thr right to remai silent anything u say can and will be use in a court of law you have the right to an attorney if you cannot afford an attorney one will be appointed for you

Waste of potential with his team by going long the train trip I mean come on and we just pretend there's no S rank nins after him I saw the whole point of red dawn nothing more then your boring let's take over the world groupies

Seriously rather have naruto in the middle of the bloody mist Civil War or better yet in a conflict between another hidden village the show had so much potential it was not so fixated on the tail beasts

Dj

Overall a pretty good conclusion though it felt a bit rushed. I enjoyed this one from beginning to end. Kudos!

Dude that was rush.

I would like to see a the Pokémon story done first.

A longer epilogue to wrap up the story with would be nice