Reviews for Itsy Bitsy Spider |
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SpiderRidersReviewAnon chapter 1 . 7/2/2017 "a new enemie" should be enemy "letten their spiders out" should be let. I don't think letten is a word. Eh, there's a couple other spelling errors. But again, please proofread. Aww... Ebony being a big brother to Hotarla sounds so cute. And I liked how you gave some depth to Brutus and Portia too, because they have none in the actual show. Anyway, it's funny, but feels OOC. The spiders might take offense to the song, but not go so far to torment Hunter. |
Mononoke-hime x sukai kurora chapter 1 . 4/13/2013 This was so funny it makes me want to see the series again. |
Forte De Tu chapter 1 . 3/20/2013 LOL way too funny! |