Reviews for The Olympians Reaction of the Fallen |
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Callum Runchman chapter 1 . 6/9 At least athena acknowledged it was her fault |
Swagkittehoffanfics chapter 1 . 2/2/2017 Really cool! Plz add. |
Jaylene Olebar chapter 1 . 3/31/2016 awesome story! |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2015 awesome |
demigodishness11 chapter 1 . 5/18/2015 I love your story, though maybe you could work on spelling and grammar corrections. Don't take that the wrong way. This is awesome. |
Fangirls Are Forever chapter 1 . 8/13/2014 Great reactions |
ThatDemigod chapter 1 . 4/20/2014 TO RICK: Y U THROW PERCABETH IN TARTARUS? Y? |
KawaiCardMistressOfSakuraCards chapter 1 . 3/13/2014 It's not a rope... I think. It was a ledge. |
RikkiCreates chapter 1 . 1/11/2014 Is English not your first language? |
Me chapter 1 . 8/5/2013 Terrible grammar, but very good story/concept. |
hpjlover chapter 1 . 7/30/2013 Great job! I really like this book! its really well written, the charachters are accurate and the plot is great! i cant wait to see what happens next i cant wait to read the next chapter PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
jesusvaldivia1992 chapter 1 . 6/10/2013 cool make more pls |
Cabba chapter 1 . 5/10/2013 When Zeus orders Hermes to bring the rest of The Seven and Nico, you wrote that he ordered him to send them to Tartarus. You must have meant Olympus. Correct that and the story's fine. Keep writing. |
m chapter 1 . 4/30/2013 Pretty good. No, really good. This is your fault." "What?" "You order Annabeth to find your stupid statue-" "My statue isn't stupid," Athena snapped but Poseidon was on roll. "-for your own pride. Annabeth barely defeated Arachne. If you just killed Arachne, instead cursed her, your statue will not taken away. Look what have you done! My son and your daughter fell to Tartarus because of YOU!" Poseidon gripped his trident tightly. I never thought about it that way... |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/6/2013 please continue |