| Reviews for Pain |
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   nila.vanathi chapter 2 . 4/21/2015 This was really beautiful. you've portrayed them so beautifully - of course, if Peter had only noticed this before, then Edmund might not have gone with the witch. Lovely story though, it's true that Edmund's pain is deeper and more central to the story than anything else. |
| Zellona chapter 2 . 1/14/2015 I. Cried. So. Much. This is definitely a good story to read if I need something to cry over, it's wonderfully written and you did a tremendous job keeping them in character. Better than I've seen them in any other fanfic. And of course, I will never tire of seeing the hidden depth in Edmund's character, and having this happen pre-Narnia made this unique. All in all, great story! |
| TeamJacob1998 chapter 2 . 1/3/2014 This was really sad |
| catycat2001 chapter 1 . 11/9/2013 Oh please continue! Your really amazing at writing too! Oh please oh please continue! |
| Tiny Teddy chapter 1 . 10/2/2013 This is so touching - I can't believe one person said 'boring'! Believe me, it's not boring - just the kind of writing I enjoy. (Seriously, if you don't have anything positive/useful to say, WHY say it?) I would have liked to see Peter comfort Ed too, but that probably wouldn't fit in with the actual book. :) Thanks for this great read! |
| ClaireZoRonoa chapter 1 . 8/24/2013 I LOVE it ! :-D But I would have liked Peter comforting Edmund... That's only my opinion though ;-) ! |
| raneko.Otaku chapter 1 . 7/15/2013 oh wow. that was lovely. im getting tired just reading about Peter getting tired of it all. i don't envy him his responsibility. well-written and wonderfully in character. great job! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/8/2013 boring |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/1/2013 Poor Edmund. Can you make another chapter, like when Peter comforts Ed or something like that? Please. |
| Allie Danger chapter 1 . 3/14/2013 Awesome |
| Ashleigh2016 chapter 1 . 3/13/2013 Please write more. I really liked it and would love to see it continued. Ashleigh USMA Cadet Candidate c/o 2020 |
| e chapter 1 . 3/13/2013 this is so good! I hope you continue with it, love brother fics! |
| James Birdsong chapter 1 . 3/12/2013 Awesome and splendid. |
| MCH chapter 1 . 3/11/2013 You think the one person who seems to be brave when really they are as worried about the situation as you are. Good story and well written. Like how you expressed all their feelings. Isthat it or will there be more? |
| MaryNL chapter 1 . 3/11/2013 Please continue it! I read this story once and i couldn't belive it didn't continue. You can do a secuel. I loved it! |
