Damnthe main thing missing here was VANILLABUTTER before Rancis's dare and after it. Him telling Vanellope the truth. Her reassuring him it wasn't his fault at all. Turbo himself saw and heard one of the racers but didn't attack or get close enough to TRULY see them that's the good thing here. (Deep Breath) Oh Rancis it was scary for you I'm sorry.

Hooooooo boy, that was a trip. Turbo is probably in my top ten most nightmarish villains, and I'm a full-fledged adult, so I REALLY don't blame Rancis for being scared out of his wits.

Good lord. Even I was scared. And its two in the morning. I do not need to be reading very good creepypasta-ish fics at two in the morning.

bien

i beg of you to continue! I have been checking everyday if you had added to this!

This was great! Very well written.

Very nice! I liked your coyness about it.
Keep writing and God bless!
Shippings

I think I'd run if I saw Turbs in the middle of the night looking all creepy too lol