Plz write more

I should stop torturing myself with unfinished stories. I get enraptured then find myself the joker on a cliff. Although, I know it's highly unlikely I'd love to know how this ends. It's a great story.

this is getting interesting,

ok been away for awhile. wow. good story so far.

not the most dynamic chapter but interesting to see what happens and gives a few decent hints on the future.

you'd actually sucked me in there. I thought it was going to be a happy chapter.

been a while but a good update.

was that MITCHELL?

oh be careful tom

so alex steals stuff.

That actually explains a lot

why do i get the feeling that there is more to that message than meets the eye.

I've been away for a while and I have to admit this is still going strong

to see this chapter but it was not bad at all.

i am so looking forward to the upcoming confrontation.

the writing could do with a clear up but the story is without question good. I like the addition of Christa. I also like mr thorn he's arrogant but not unlikeable . I'm interested in these deals coming up it seems an ideal time for thorn to show some evil. Regardless i hope you update soon as this is my favorite being human ff story.

i think i see where you are going with this.

but why all the nightclub references...

can't wait to find out.

oh btw hilarious rolling stones reference

interesting to see a chapter just focussed on hal.

i loved the bit about how hal thinks about tom