Reviews for Betrayal |
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Guest chapter 5 . 6/21 at 20k words it's pretty much a one-shot to be honest but i liked it anyways it was a really fun scene to envision when daphne & harry tricked tom so simply, the simplest tricks are too often overlooked in favour of bombastic fighting. and for a wizard's fight, it's only fitting! |
Guest chapter 5 . 6/20 at 20k words it's pretty much a one-shot to be honest but i liked it anyways it was a really fun scene to envision when daphne & harry tricked tom so simply, the simplest tricks are too often overlooked in favour of bombastic fighting. and for a wizard's fight, it's only fitting! |
noice chapter 5 . 4/22 great story might be one of the most interesting that ive read |
stevem1 chapter 5 . 4/14 A pretty good short AU told from multiple POV. |
Sonia25 chapter 2 . 4/13 So harry after all his shit in life ends up with a slit in this story wow what a prize for the hero and if u expect for people to sympathise or feel bad for the whore daphne then u r looking at wrong place , what a pathetic piece of shit writing ewww |
Hitmen101 chapter 5 . 4/12 Cool little story. :D :) |
Crypt chapter 5 . 4/12 I keep coming back to re read this story - it’s amazing, definitely one if the best stories out there. The different POV and time skips make this story much stronger compared to if you wrote every single day/interaction that lots of people do here on FFnet. I really wish you wrote a sequel, as the end of this story just makes me want for more. To see Harry become human again, and for Harry and Daphne to heal their brokenness... |
LongSelfindulgentReviews chapter 5 . 1/26 This was really great. I’m sorry some reviewers made you feel otherwise, but you did a terrific job. I’m glad you didn’t write a sequel or prequel or whatever, it would have cheapened it. I appreciate that you let this breath on its own |
Gvagore chapter 2 . 1/19 You're fucking digusting for even thinking of this shit. What the fuck. Fuck you. |
wujuninja chapter 5 . 1/14 this is fking amazing |
Felicia1021 chapter 2 . 1/6 I love how you put some background info about Blaise Zabini, he's one of my favorite characters but I didn't know him as a character that well. |
WellMet chapter 1 . 12/26/2019 way too edgy |
Rebatrek chapter 5 . 12/18/2019 That was good and quite different. The different POV's was great. Thank you for sharing |
xvector chapter 5 . 11/24/2019 Awesome story. Never even realized you didn’t narrate from Harry’s perspective. |
hZJ336bhUEG7cs chapter 5 . 7/12/2019 Honestly, this ended far less tragically than I thought it would. I'd been expecting Daphne to be forced to betray Harry in the end because she had a spell on her or something. |