Reviews for Betrayal
Guest chapter 5 . 6/21
at 20k words it's pretty much a one-shot to be honest
but i liked it anyways
it was a really fun scene to envision when daphne & harry tricked tom so simply, the simplest tricks are too often overlooked in favour of bombastic fighting. and for a wizard's fight, it's only fitting!
Guest chapter 5 . 6/20
at 20k words it's pretty much a one-shot to be honest
but i liked it anyways
it was a really fun scene to envision when daphne & harry tricked tom so simply, the simplest tricks are too often overlooked in favour of bombastic fighting. and for a wizard's fight, it's only fitting!
noice chapter 5 . 4/22
great story might be one of the most interesting that ive read
stevem1 chapter 5 . 4/14
A pretty good short AU told from multiple POV.
Sonia25 chapter 2 . 4/13
So harry after all his shit in life ends up with a slit in this story wow what a prize for the hero and if u expect for people to sympathise or feel bad for the whore daphne then u r looking at wrong place , what a pathetic piece of shit writing ewww
Hitmen101 chapter 5 . 4/12
Cool little story. :D :)
Crypt chapter 5 . 4/12
I keep coming back to re read this story - it’s amazing, definitely one if the best stories out there.

The different POV and time skips make this story much stronger compared to if you wrote every single day/interaction that lots of people do here on FFnet.

I really wish you wrote a sequel, as the end of this story just makes me want for more. To see Harry become human again, and for Harry and Daphne to heal their brokenness...
LongSelfindulgentReviews chapter 5 . 1/26
This was really great. I’m sorry some reviewers made you feel otherwise, but you did a terrific job. I’m glad you didn’t write a sequel or prequel or whatever, it would have cheapened it. I appreciate that you let this breath on its own
Gvagore chapter 2 . 1/19
You're fucking digusting for even thinking of this shit. What the fuck. Fuck you.
wujuninja chapter 5 . 1/14
this is fking amazing
Felicia1021 chapter 2 . 1/6
I love how you put some background info about Blaise Zabini, he's one of my favorite characters but I didn't know him as a character that well.
WellMet chapter 1 . 12/26/2019
way too edgy
Rebatrek chapter 5 . 12/18/2019
That was good and quite different. The different POV's was great. Thank you for sharing
xvector chapter 5 . 11/24/2019
Awesome story. Never even realized you didn’t narrate from Harry’s perspective.
hZJ336bhUEG7cs chapter 5 . 7/12/2019
Honestly, this ended far less tragically than I thought it would. I'd been expecting Daphne to be forced to betray Harry in the end because she had a spell on her or something.
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