Really liked this!

Very good so far :) very unique story, I like it!

Not a criticism at all but in chapter 3 the zillion should be played with middle finger and thumb not index. No biggie but I'm an annoying nit picker. I love the story though

love this story. its very creative.

Update soon, please!

really good

Liked this.

Cite fic!

Oh a nightmare. I wish I thought of that. I guess I did t think about how she'd cope with the Destroyer. I still think one about him being a dancing monkey would be good, considering she saw him as Captain America, but not the road it took to get there.

Great work on this.

Keep at it.

What an interesting idea for a story. I've just caught up! So far...really enjoying this! I hope there's an update soon cause I can't wait for more. :)

i have thoroughly enjoyed reading this so far, and can't wait to read more!

Liked this.

I really enjoyed this story. I can't wait until the new one comes out! :)

I really liked the feel of this chapter. It felt like traveling back into the 40's baseball scene. Though I might be biased because I think people were more involved then than they are now. To much technology and fast paced lives to really enjoy what was once. So congrats on the authenticity of the time period.

Also the whole time I'm reading this, I can see Darcy the next day, ask Steve about the dress because she now wants it.

Maybe have a memory of Howard or his time as a dancing monkey. Show not his before-serum side or his Captain side, but what it took to get there. Or the friendship he had with Tony's dad, so she can examine his (Tony's) face when she meets him and say he looks like him not to piss him off but as a statement.