Reviews for Breathe Me
allen r chapter 3 . 7/15
OK just gotta say Rachel was not really a good person either. The gleeks treated her as badly as she treated them. She viewed herself as the only star of glee and the rest as her less talented less worthy stage extras. She blatantly tore their singing down to crush third spirits. She tried to steal Finn when she learned he was dating someone. She made the girls take peds. That's just the short list from season one. She does more and worse. Truth is the school treats her the way they do cause she treats them just as badly. She has never done a nice thing and not taken full credit or gained from it. Quinn the person who was said to be evil saw the gleeks disappointment about year book. So she black mailed sue. Did she take credit or gain anything no!
allen r chapter 25 . 4/23
OK kinda a let down of a story. Quinn is my fav character and I search for stories based on her and its a let down when she gets so little time.
allen r chapter 24 . 4/23
OK that was kinda a let down the fight with Finn was to short and did not abuse him enough. The Rachel leaving glee that had been building up slowly and in kinda a haphazard way was a big let down.
allen r chapter 23 . 4/23
OK this was a real romance chapter nice job. But you still way under use Quinn.
allen r chapter 20 . 4/22
OK u do all these time skips yet another chapter with no romance? Let me guess last chapter last paragraph has all the romance?
allen r chapter 19 . 4/22
OK six chapters left not nearly enough Quinn and no romance yet
allen r chapter 12 . 4/21
ok that was not cool. so rachel who is the one who hit on finn even after she was told he was dating quinn. who helped finn cheat by kissing him. she left glee cause she did not get a solo. she got the glee girls to take drugs. she went on a date with finn while he dated quinn. yet you have made rachel the prefect angel what a laugh cause those are only a few of the vile things she did in season 1.
allen r chapter 11 . 4/21
at last a whole chapter with quinn but guessing by the an wont get many
allen r chapter 10 . 4/21
So 10 chapters in and only 2 had Quinn OK I will read two more if they also have Quinn barely in them I will go away as this story will not be what I was looking for. By the way if people actually look at season one do you realise that Finn Rachel and puck are the real villains of the story? So yeah I understand why people dislike Finn and puck as they never owned up to their behavior unlike everyone else.
allen r chapter 8 . 4/21
OK so s story with Quinn in it that has only 25 chapters waits till chapter 8 is a third of the way through to bring her in? What's more she is the major love interest of the other main character? OK let's get one thing strait in order for a story to be called romance there has to be romance between the main characters having them fight for the next 16 chapters then in last chapter have them admit they like each other is not a romance. Romans requires dates, kisses flirting
vicky324 chapter 15 . 7/9/2019
'Hope you like Dave and Blaine as a couple'... then Glee actually goes and does this lol
Guest chapter 7 . 3/14/2018
Omg that was awesome. She's badass
Guest chapter 25 . 9/20/2017
All the faberry fictions were awesome thank you wish you would write more
KoalaBear2602 chapter 25 . 12/4/2016
That was amazing. I was captivated through the whole story. I loved the dynamic of the characters and the ending chapter that tied everything up. Thank you for a great story :)
Guest chapter 24 . 11/11/2016
Wow thanks enjoy this wish you write more faberry fic like this Rachel so kool thanks again
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