| Reviews for The Narutimate Biotic |
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   imortalshadows chapter 5 . 7/11/2016 psssssttt he abandoned fan fiction or at least this story |
| Stratos263 chapter 4 . 3/3/2016 No surprise there at the end |
| Stratos263 chapter 3 . 3/3/2016 Oh great now what |
| Stratos263 chapter 2 . 3/3/2016 Next chapter |
| Stratos263 chapter 1 . 3/3/2016 What the fuck that was is shocking revelations |
| Alex2909 chapter 4 . 10/1/2015 nice story, like how naruto fits into it |
| spurlinpatricksean2 chapter 1 . 3/6/2015 Please update soon on this |
| SeekerOfPeace chapter 5 . 12/10/2014 I like this story. PlsUpdateSoon. Could you just make the Juubi slaughter everyone instead of a kyuubified was brutal. |
| pensuka chapter 5 . 7/6/2014 i wonder how mordin will react seeing naruto |
| deadal chapter 5 . 4/15/2014 kind of fun, still naruto is a one-trick poney, and not a very good one... will the system alliance be canon or wil there be element from narutoverse? |
| bfg10k17 chapter 1 . 1/8/2014 Oh it's so hard to keep reading, but I will soldier on for now. My reasons ? For one, you made a mistake in your very first sentence. That's not cool. A lot of other typos too through this chapter, plus the constant switches between past and present tenses, inside single sentences was really distracting. I do hope your grammar will get better as you progress, because let me tell you. That's one helluwa original idea. That, I like. |
| outcastmike chapter 4 . 11/27/2013 You did a great job so far can't wait to see what will happens next |
| joseph.e.rios chapter 4 . 10/15/2013 Please continue this story. |
| Nutjob117 chapter 4 . 10/5/2013 This is awesome upadate soon. |
| nightmare daniel chapter 4 . 9/10/2013 If i yell do we get more updates? |
