Well thought out! This was fascinating! Thank you so much h!

I know you wrote this a long time ago but I did want to let you know I really enjoyed your story. You mentioned a couple minor errors, which I noticed, but in my opinion they were easily ignored. The story was so well written it had me completely engaged in the action rather than glitches. You wrote a wonderfully protective yet overbearing John. A sweet and strong Dean as well as a smart and brave Sam. Bravo.

Good story!

Very nice week done thank you so much for writing this! Super entertaining! :)

Very cool exposition! Love it!

Ah this is still so entertaining! The characterization of both brothers is so spot on. I didn't say it in the past chapter review but I very much loved the scene where Dean's holding Sam while John's first aiding him after the Aswang.

Also I loved the levels of reaction Dean had to Sam falling in this chapter: amusement, annoyance then finally concern : totally in character I thought.

Final thing: this is a fascinating mystery and I'm so interested in finding out how the school and the aswang connect! I'm sad there are only 2 chapters left!

Thank you again for writing! - Alex l.k.

This is a really entertaining story! Loving it so far thank you!

Excellent story! Kept me guessing.

Thanks for sharing.

Very amazing story. Even if it was a bit sad.

Wow! What a great story from start to finish! Loved it and such an intriguing twist at the end! Knew SOMETHING was weird about the monster, but never thought of THAT. Very clever! And you really capture the boys tones and attitude extremely well. Looking forward to your next two that I haven't read yet and hoping you're working on something new!

Started this one today after just recently finding your stuff and reading Stubborn Survival. Man, I hope you are still writing because I'm thoroughly loving your style. This was a great start to the story and you did a good job with a really sensitive topic...I live not far from Sandy Hook and was in fact driving through there at the very time the school shooting was taking place there, so I know this can be a sensitive, painful topic, but you handled it well.

And, (God help me, LOL)...I was actually kinda hoping that Sam HAD gotten at least a minor injury so there would be blood for John and Dean to panic at, or that the gun had gone off when he tackled the gunman for the same reason. Oh well...the fact that you had him take down the gunman was awesome, and learning later that he hadn't even CONSIDERED running was perfect. I hope we get to hear Dean tell John that.

You also seem to have a good handle on John the way I would imagine he would have been with them at that age...gruff and abrupt and not particularly concerned with the idea of dragging them around despite Sam's longing to be in school, but loving and caring and concerned about them nonetheless. It's a hard balance to find, and you're doing a great job of it so far. Looking forward to reading the rest of it when I get a chance.

I'm sorry if I sound rude when I say this, but I would like to correct a fact. There is no such thing as an EVP detector. EVP is electronic voice phenomenon. Those are caught on voice recorders. Now if you meant an EMF (electro magnetic field) detector that would be correct.

Once again, I am not trying to be rude. I simply thought you might like a little friendly constructive criticism.

Great story by the way! I really like what you're getting at!

I really enjoyed this story! :) I am sorry I didn't review each chapter, I just wanted to get the the next one to find out what happens next!

You did an amazing job with this story. You kept it plausible, realistic and very entertaining. I think you also kept Sam, Dean & John in total character. And the timely updates were greatly appreciated. Thanks so much!

Really great job. Very in character. The voices are really good and I could picture having this last discussion in the car so clearly. I hope you keep writing.