"i'm not a possesion"
Dumb feminist propoganda, it's only natural to feel possesive over your lover in a relationship, AS A PERSON, not as an object dumdum

But at least it ended okay with Luffy's following counter-line, so w/e

She's a carnivore Luffy! You need to be on the offensive to establish- eeeeeehhhhhh, this is Luffy we're talking about. I don't think he cares unless its about being loved. Still- go on the offensive!

She's in heat! SPLIT HER IN HALF!

again great story I loved the LOVE you part of Luffy...thank you

Nice

Your writing ability is incredible! I'm glad that I can find some fan fictions without any grammar mistakes! (this post is not to offend other people including people whose first language isn't english!) Anyway keep up the good work!

This is really cute... I like how you skirted some of the more sordid details and stuck with the mostly-appropriate things. :)

Hahahaha

I am...ROLF-ing! Haha, the last part! Lol, that was funny, it was a good lemon to read, it was balanced and easy going, unlike some can be. Your skills are great and I enjoyed this!

OMG A NEW STORY FROM YOU *dies*

You're one of the few people that can actually write stories like this well. Seriously I can't even begin to describe how happy I was seeing a new Luffy/Nami story you wrote.

This fic, perfection. Having a limited English knowledge, I can't give you a quality review. All I know is, as a reader I've enjoyed every second of reading this fic, and I am looking forward for more from you. Should you decide to write more.

Thanks for writing this!

:)

Great job. I like it.

Cute, Hot and the ending was Funny.

Well Done.

kawaii... I loved it!
Please write some more stories, but make them longer!

Oh, man, this is hot! You are the greatest ever!