Oh wow. So awesome. So warming. I love it. Great writing. Thanks heaps for sharing

Dude, awesome!
You left me laughing at the end of it
First time reading something from second point of view, but nice job, really well done
My compliments, for that is no simply feat!

This was absolutely wonderful and well written and I loved everything about this. I love these two and this made me love them more.

Awesome story! Made me smile. )

This was awesome and so wonderfully written. I hope you write more for this pairing.

That was ADORABLE!

The two of them are so cute in here and the second person POV is effective. I'm looking forward to read more BeChloe from you, fellow MAI Hime fan-san. :)

Awwwwww! That was adorable!

this was absolutely adorable, oh my gosh.

This is spectacular!

much applause ]

Lovely!

Cute fluff is cuuuuuute! XD

My favorite line "Not in the 'hey, you're chill, let's hang out' way. More in the 'my stomach starts break-dancing and my voice wants to go all squeaky when you smile at me' way." - because it just means that much more when it's an acapella singer's voice going all squeaky as opposed to a normal person's voice. XD

Yes! dude, I'm so glad you wrote this! I, as well, used to be in the Mai Hime fandom and adore your stories, so you writing for Bechloe gives me so. much feels. since they are my new OTP and you write about the one I'm most fond of. I hope you delve deep into their psyches like you do for Shiznat.

they're **