Reviews for A Matter of Trust |
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Guest chapter 1 . 11/4/2016 I figured it was a school you knew. Is recommend not just dropping names of places if most of your audience doesn't know it; I'm not going to bother to go look up where it is. Saying they met in "random place name" doesn't tell me if they're in a library or a coffee shop. Anyway, beside that and the fact that I can't imagine Katniss joining a sorority in a million years, this was cute. You're a decent writer. :-) |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2015 I absolutely loved every minute of this! |
liljennmartin chapter 1 . 10/28/2014 Cute story...Go Seminoles! |
ebdarcy.qt4good chapter 1 . 12/3/2013 Good work! |
AlyssaMPawl chapter 1 . 6/22/2013 Florida State! I live in Lee County, Florida! |
SoThere chapter 1 . 4/3/2013 I absolutely loved this story. Made me laugh, made me cry; hits all the feels. Great job! |
Xcathy chapter 1 . 3/25/2013 Omg this story was awesome! I love how their relationship was in the beginning. You added really cute, unique quirks into the story which differentiate it from the typical hate-love story. I couldn't stop smiling at parts and not to mention the Gale scene at the end lol. Great job! You really developed their relationship. :) |
ShowBones chapter 1 . 3/26/2013 Why this story does not have more reviews is beyond me. It's always refreshing to read an AU story that progressed Peeta and Katniss' relationship at a realistic pace, rather than rushing it. I like that Gale wasn't a jealous asshole character that so many Peeta/Katniss stories present him as, and I like that Peeta wasn't a lovesick puppy but was someone who was also allowed to have his own faults. I would also like to add that I thought this was well written. It's easy for authors to lose the story, especially at this length, and therefore lose it's readers, but I was entertained throughout the whole one-shot and look forward to reading more! |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/23/2013 oh how i loved it! well done! |
I-Say-Wicked chapter 1 . 3/25/2013 Adored this story! |
Oh Shiz chapter 1 . 3/23/2013 Shout out to my fellow Nole! |
guest chapter 1 . 3/23/2013 I hate douchey guys and i really don't understand how girls could fall for that crap but this was well written and Katniss and Peeta are awesome together. :) |
azngirl123 chapter 1 . 3/24/2013 Loved it. |
cali-chan chapter 1 . 3/23/2013 first reaction: oh heyyyyy, that's FSU! :D i went there too, and had a bunch of classes in bellamy, though i wish i had had a professor like paylor, haha. xD i never hung out at strozier much- i majored in engineering so dirac was more my usual haunt- but i lived on west call, almost at the intersection with tennessee, so i had a blast imagining katniss and peeta and the rest walking down the streets i used to walk down. :3 always nice to share a fandom with a fellow 'nole! thanks for the ride down memory lane! those were the days... second reaction: great, so now you have to write a gale/madge sequel or i will never be able to rest in peace. lol. xD this was a very nice story! very funny and interesting, so good job. :) |
Thynerdgurl chapter 1 . 3/22/2013 Love it! |