I’ve loved this story so much. So funny and cute! Thanks for making the romance between Naruto and Rasa wholesome and not creepy. Glad Jariya ended up being a good guy to Naruto. Also Naruto mastering sage mode LOL. Wish I could’ve seen Naruto own Sasuke in the chunin in exams.

Va-t-il y avoir une suite de cette histoire un jour ?! Parce que ça serait triste qu'il n'y en ait pas, car elle est géniale comme histoire et Rasa et Naruto sont tellement mignons ensemble et je veux tellement voir les examens chuunin et la réaction de Konoha par rapport à Naru !

Ils sont enfin ensemble ! J'ai hâte de lire la suite !

Cette histoire est vraiment géniale et hilarante ! La relation de Naru et Rasa est vraiment adorable ! C'est amusant qu'ils l'appelle "Ka-chan" !

cant wait for what's next!i bet it will be awesome!

Love it please continue this story soon

More please... don't abandon this story please. Don't abandon me

omg this is so hilarious. please come back to this

I really like this book because it's a pairing I've never seen before and it's funny. I stayed laughing the whole time I read it. I originally came across it looking for femnaru/gaara but decided to give this a go and I loved it. the only confusing thing was how Kushina and Minato didnt realize she was a girl when Naruto was first born or whoever put a diaper on her didnt.

I just finished reading this fanfic and I've gotta say I've thoroughly enjoyed it throughout. It's actually the first time I read one and I've specifically created an account to write this. I didn't know what to expect from it since I'd never been on this site (and stumbled upon it accidentally while searching for hoshi no suna ;). But that's how I prefer reading or watching some story. Furthermore, I can't even call myself a real fan of the original show since I've only watched some episodes. In any case, something drove me to just see what this was like and I don't regret it one bit! It may not mean much from some random reader but I now have newfound respect for fanfic writers (I admit to having had some prejudice).
Done with the disclaimer :P, on to the actual review. I can only stress what has already been said: its strong point and appeal is its humor. And to have humor it needs originality. The story takes directions the canon one just can't (as far as I've watched, anyway). It also didn't drag on unnecessarily, which I won't either.
To anyone wondering, I recommend reading the first chapter. You'll realize immediately whether you'll like the rest or not.
(I'd add one additional little comment to the author but I consider it a light spoiler - as I said, I'm a bit particular about this)

Best kind of crack is literary crack. We need more crack!

OMG, I was cracking up so much and just rofl! Loved it!

i love this story. i thank you for writing this. keep it up -

...oh, gosh...I need more!

please update soon It's so hilarious