I liked it looking forward to the next chapter

I liked it looking forward to the next chapter

I love it looking forward to the next chapter

Thank you for the update! I've been following this story since the beginning and I love it so much.

I'm so happy there's been an update, and a lovely one at that too! Still love this story after all these years.

I've been following this story since 2013 and you never let me down. Mai is a wonderful character - herself being strong, stubborn and ambitious, she is the perfect match for Jareth. I am always thrilled for new updates, so I truly hope you keep them coming!

This is still one of my favourite stories on this site all these years later. I appreciate each update and look into Mai’s adventure, so please keep this going!

"Much-awaited"? By whom, pray? Not me!

Rubbishy and worse than fanfic.

I hate Jareth with anyone butSarah, so will not be reading this MarySue.

I can't express how much I love your writing. You have such a talent! I love the movie Labyrinth- it's a childhood favourite of mine, and I feel as though you have portrayed Jareth so well in your writing, and I can't begin to express how well-developed and well thought out you've made his family and surrounding kingdom. You've clearly demonstrated a profound amount of creativity, which I think is something that is really special.

You really bring the characters to life, and I've been hooked on this story after deciding to read it again and catch up. I loved the first story you wrote where you introduced Mai; and I have come to love her so much, I can really feel for her and am always wanting to know what she will face next.

You always provide such long chapters, that are always accurate in terms of grammar, punctuation and spelling and presentation. I hope that you will feel inspired knowing that your story is as successful as it is.

I really, really love this story, and I hope that these words of praise will encourage you to keep writing.

You're doing a fantastic job, thank you. Keep up the good work!

Short but lovely, I wonder what this Prince Daryn is going to be like.

I'm so happy for the new chapter, just got the email and happily stopped work to read. yay!

About time! Is it me or more than a cold frozen heart could be melted?

I will be reading your prequel, these dynamics are to strong. I must know. This is great story. Looking forward to reading more. The ending of the chapter was so sad, I must know what exactly happened before all of this.