Reviews for Forward Unto Dawn
TwinkieMain chapter 46 . 8/5
Nice! I was waiting for the day when the Spirit of Fire would reunite with the rest of the UNSC. Such an awesome chapter btw. Hope to see more in the near future! :)
badkidoh chapter 46 . 8/5
Yet another great chapter. I'm just happy it still being updated.
atsik101 chapter 46 . 8/5
Adrian Cutter finally ask the 10 trillion credits question. And I am sure that the answer to that is one helluva a fight to save them all! Looking forward to seeing the reunion with her father and the Master Chief getting back up to his feet to finish the fight!
Guest chapter 45 . 7/1
can you please update this im begging you dude this is such a cool story and im super into it so please update it especially since its been almost a year since chapter 45
Guest chapter 30 . 11/9/2019
Nice dz
Guest chapter 21 . 10/28/2019
Good ga
s9ecm75lhrvsap chapter 45 . 9/6/2019
I reread chapter 44 before diving into 45, and boy was it good to be reminded of all that was happening. I love the story, sweet very sweet, enjoyable what became of Savannah, Sarah, and Kyle!
supercode chapter 45 . 8/26/2019
Great! I'm sure the good guys will be able to change the future. They always have before.
SemperFi34 chapter 45 . 8/26/2019
Another great chapter!
badkidoh chapter 45 . 8/25/2019
Yet another great chapter.
HowlnMadHowie chapter 45 . 8/25/2019
Now I understand why this was aptly titled A-Team. But they should know tht they also got an engineer on their team. This is now looking like Genysis. Never thought I'd agree witht hat concept although better that than Salvation.
Bucio chapter 45 . 8/25/2019
Wow.

I don't have words to describe what these last chapters have been, because in spite of some inconveniences (yes, I call a minor inconvenient to see Master Chief seriously wounded, which gives chance that he goes through the same upgrade as Kelly) it was hoped that even with the support of the Didacta, guiding the Covenant species, and the inclusion of ONI and UNSC forces (at least our heroes have some advantage over ONI (and Kilo5) knowing everything about them, thanks to the extra materials of Halo) It could give them a chance to defeat Skynet...

Nothing could be further from the truth, as a bad End to the Terminator Genesys awaits us, with John Connor being turned into a monster by Skynet, becoming again of vital importance his salvation and well-being for the good of the multiverse.

Then it was no coincidence that Jim found that endo and John Henry, and that endo is nothing less, what remains of John Connor, then maybe Jim will appear again, because besides John Connor, he was also (is) vital to all this, plus I guess we will see in the special chapters of this special A-Team, why John Henry and John Connor's Terminator body, came to Jim's world.

Of the interludes, who were apparently safe, suddenly found themselves at the center of the action, and forced to act to help their other allies fulfill their mission, it's good to see that despite being a cover, they became as close, like a family, but Savannah's indecision, as to Catherine, while logic, I don't like it, because thanks to Savannah, Weaver changed to being much more than she was in the beginning, and machine and everything, but she may not react well if Savannah rejects her in any way, I guess with John Connor being the one to talk to Star Trek Savannah about the significance she has for Weaver.

As I said the future that the prophets showed to Kyle, is very dark, because despite their effort, one of the central people in their effort, would become his downfall (being a very hard blow for Kyle and especially for Sarah, who saw that as the triumph of her immortal enemy - and when Cameron finds out, her reaction to what could have been her John Connor's fate could have been much stronger), although the Prophets' reveal already generated a change, as their powers allow a form of time travel undetectable to Skynet, which allows Kyle to eliminate Genesys John Connor (or Terminator John) so quickly that his consciousness could not leave his body in time (or could he?) and with his endo, being vital for our heroes, in addition to winning an unexpected ally in Isabel, the UNSC A.I that accompanied Cameron of the future, who died in the battle with Genesys John.

It has to be that bad for big and mysterious (and powerful) forces to intervene to avoid that future, because it could mean the destruction of the multiverse at the hands of Skynet, who help Kyle, Sarah, and Savannah to fulfill their first goal, and giving them allies to plan for their next goal: save John Connor from Skynet.

And his next objective is quite ambitious, as Isabel said, to make a Kirk and steal nothing less than the legendary Enterprise, to which they would have to do a Heavy upgrade to put it to the same level that Voyager and the other ships, besides incredible stealthy capacities to infiltrate and to fulfill thier objectives, being a race against the clock until they arrive at the moment that will define everything: to save John Connor (and any other member of that resistance of being caught by Skynet).

Perhaps with Spartan upgrades (Isabel may have that knowledge, by her origin) for Kyle, Savannah and Sarah, especially, to have a way to fighting when it's their turn to jump into the unknown to save someone important to them.

Besides that at some point, I suppose that both groups of our heroes will plan for the contingency that after succeeding and defeating Skynet, the reactions of their respective governments, especially ONI and the special forces of Star Treek, who would seek to suppress, contain and even eliminate the technology derived from that alliance and the people who participated (John Connor, Cameron and his family, Catherine, Savannah and John Henry, Master Chief and Cortana, Miranda, the Dr. Halsey, Noble Six; and Seven of Nine, The Doctor, The Voyager and the Future Upgraded Enterprise)

Good luck and keep it up.
s9ecm75lhrvsap chapter 44 . 1/20/2019
Wonderful chapter which I enjoyed thoroughly. Great entertainment, big emotions, sorry development. Thanks a lot!
jlnorris75 chapter 44 . 1/11/2019
I like this story but I wish you would work on override fare more
supercode chapter 44 . 1/9/2019
Great chapter!
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