Reviews for Breaking Away
emmerrss92 chapter 1 . 11/29/2019
TEARS I TELL YOU! TEARS
Elliot Ray chapter 1 . 12/5/2018
I really liked this! Eeeeek! I'm definitely on board with watching Dean take care of Sam! You did a great job writing this, the story flowed so smoothly! It was wonderful to read
Felicja chapter 1 . 9/29/2018
Such a good story. I really like the direction you took with the ending, leaving it bittersweet, yet with the air of a happy ending to the tragic story. Well done.
Fawkes Flame chapter 1 . 4/4/2018
Loved it! Great job!
smittythethird chapter 1 . 8/5/2016
I don't know how to feel. But I give this one shot 4/5 stars, written well, tear jerker, and the end... I don't know why but it made me not happy but not sad it made me have the feels. Great job!
Orion Hunts chapter 1 . 7/1/2016
Cute story; I'm glad that John grew up... In stories like this, not necessarily abusive John but rather just dicky John, he always stays an alcoholic and a douchebag even after Dean (or someone else) reprehend him. Fantastic story!
writeforeverforlife chapter 1 . 2/11/2015
Normally, I dont read abuse fics either... but this was genius! Excellent job!
Anon chapter 1 . 1/25/2014
this is beautifully wonderful
Kira the cat chapter 1 . 10/22/2013
Sam's whole thing about Dean having to choose broke my heart. And I don't know why I even bother reading these, I just outright don't like John because I know from experience that that kind of half neglect (hating what you do to your kids is one thing but to continually do it in search of revenge is another) does things to a person, but it always make me smile when Dean get's his big brother mode moments and this is full of them. I'm glad you wrote this even if you don't like John being abusive.
FangirlingFanatic chapter 1 . 8/5/2013
Loved this so much! Really portrayed the awesome relationship between Same and Dean, and your plot was great and unbelievably IC. Really can't say more then that, I'm too awed.

GREAT job!
Stevie chapter 1 . 7/26/2013
Sad. I do not like abusive John but you write it well. I like the Dean is given some credit.
AmaraRae chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
this broke my heart and I loved it so much please write more like it if possible
Jay Rowan chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
Aw, this was happy and sad at the same time. I love these kinds of stories where John understands that he has done severe wrong things and lets his sons have space. Thanks for writing this!
mandancie chapter 1 . 5/17/2013
this was really good! :) I always love when Dean protects Sam; even from their father. This was really good!
Benjaminjonathan chapter 1 . 4/25/2013
Ahwww, I really like it! :)
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