| Reviews for Guess Where the Heart Lies |
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   yourcloudnine chapter 2 . 1/1/2015 honestly, i thought it was great. just a few rough spots to polish, but very good. loved the 'games are all we have' line, and basically all the dialogue. damn. though,'on some parts i didnt think that the characterization on mari was spot on, but i guess it really is hard to work with such a new character, so i understand. guess analyzing mari so much made me too critical on her characterization so, lmao. but really though, this is great. thanks for this! |
| COBRASTEVE chapter 2 . 11/28/2014 Okay, a YEAR! Are you kidding me? There. Now that's over, this is really good on a first intro to young intimacy. I love Asuka's bitching even as she went along. Really well done story! |
| OBSERVER01 chapter 2 . 11/22/2014 quite have more |
| MeisterAyyJayy chapter 1 . 3/3/2014 NOT A CLIFFHANGER. When you get the time, please continue this! It was very well written! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/11/2013 Please! Continue! I need moaaar |
| Natsu chapter 1 . 4/29/2013 Need moooaar please! |
| OBSERVER01 chapter 1 . 4/14/2013 interesting,please continue this |
| Bread chapter 1 . 3/30/2013 Moar, please. w Can't wait to read more of it! |
| jkl chapter 1 . 3/29/2013 Nuh! I was waiting for a proper Mari/Asuka soooo long! Wow! awesome! But you can't just drop it like that, can you? No, please! I'm begging u! |
| James Birdsong chapter 1 . 3/29/2013 Very cool and somewhat awesome. |
| TodayParade chapter 1 . 3/30/2013 I must know what happens next! Update soon please. :) |
| Blitzstrahl chapter 1 . 3/29/2013 yeah and here it is the AsukaxMari doujinshi flood has reached FFN |
