In my honest opinion I think the story is fine as it is. There is only 2 things that disagree with me. Why did Xanxus attempt the coup? It is implied that he knew he was adopted, was there something extra in Timoteo's journal that he found?
Also Xanxus felt a bit OOC in the first chapter.

Brotherly Xancus X Tsuna plz

18 y sigo leyendo fics XD (conozco a personas que tienen 30 para arriba que escriben y siguen leyendo fanfiction ) y no no es patético (al menos a mí vista¿?)

Creí que solo tendría seis capítulos para leer para luego desecharlo dado a qué pensé que no sería actualizado (como muchos dices del 2009 que siguen sin dar señales de vida) ,pero me lleve la sorpresa de la nota final que aunque ya tiene unos meses no son años por lo que me da esperanza.

Tu fic está muy bien hecho, me gustó mucho en realidad 3 ojalá puedas actualizar pronto(si te da el tiempo)

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PD: ¿X27? (Sería bonito¿? No lo sé pero amo a esos dos juntos amándose :'D)

Go to hell do r calling me old, you old geezer

Yo! Thank you for all your hard work! I'm glad to see u alive :D good luck with college and life in general.

Yess! I remember 15 years old me loving this fic a lot. now i'm in college too and is curious how u would rewrite this fic, so looking forward for the update!

Hi!

Thank you for coming back to this story!
If I may suggest, perhaps take everything down, so that when people read this story, they won’t get confused about disparaties? I dunno...
Anyway, thank you for returning and dedicating your free time, which I would think is small for a college student, to your readers!
All the best,
DnT13

Welcome back.

Middle school for you was high school to me, so you can imagine my surprise when I got the alert that this had an update. Not an unpleasant one, for sure. It's always a delight to see authors get renewed excitement for their works.

I look forward to seeing it.
-NG

I’ll be waiting. I just finished college. Guess that makes me old. Lol

Hi
Welcome back!

I will wait as patiently as I can for the rewrite.
I think that you should delete the old chapters or you can post the rewrite as a different story.
I don't think that you are pathetic that you write anime fanfiction.

cant wait for next update ~

Yes ! I can't wait to read it your rewriting ! I'm 17, I will be 18 soon.. Honestly I don't think it's pathetic to write and read Fanfiction, it's amazing ! When I see the notification, I click quickly on it even it's not chapter but it's cool too so yeah take your time (or not, do whatever you want) I'll be waiting ! :D

Update please.

Aw. I'm kinda dissapointed Tsuna doesn't act like a Classic Cloud, (and hasn't shown Cloud tendencies, inverted or otherwise, so far) but meh, whatever