Hi! I just wanted to let you know that I’ve read this story many times through the years. I think it is so beautiful and really would have made a perfect ending to the story. Each story you tell in here is amazing! Thank you for sharing your gift!

I just finished this story! I loved it. So many adventures and a nice balance of action and romance. It was so neat to have such an extensive narrative in an AU. I love the epilogue where elements from the whole story pull together so we get happy pieces of the whole concentrated and leave with a smile. I think I experienced absolutely every emotion during this piece. Well done. Great original characters too! My only recommendations are a bit more editing and some work on characterization. I was super absorbed in the story (I couldn't put it down!), but when a character did something odd or if the writing got wonky it kind of tore me away. I also wanted to know more about the original characters. They need more time!It's a super long story though, so editing and revising is a huge task and for the most part very well executed.

No Chakotay!

Bruahahah Martina Radcliffe and Joseph Potter ahahah idol

Spiders aren't insects!

If Kathryn doesn't wake up, I swear I'll stop reading this.

Awesome with Chakotay vs. Garl. So much better than Chakotay in the actual episode. Much more consistent with Chakotay's character.

whhhhhattttttttttt ahhhhhhhhhhh

cliffhanger?!

I can't say it's a good thing what happened to Ella but I'm glad that you handled it the way you did

Nooooooooooo :(((((

Interesting turn of events! Surprised by tuvok there...

Glad the doctors quarters situation reached a compromise

Good reply by da Vinci

I must be feeling very weepy today because I keep tearing up at these chapters!

I loved the line about the past being the future and the future being the past. Also puppy! Yay!