Great story! Those two are so cute together! I wish there was more!Yvonne

Love your story and i cant wait until the next update.

This story should be deleted because it is physically impossible for a man to become pregnant.

this is beyond beautiful omg...

Omg UPDATE this please it's so cute I don't see many Shikamaru and Naruto pairings at all especially MPREG ones. I would love to see what will happen next. Will Itachi, orouchimaru and Saske attack the leaf village
What will Saske do once he finds out Naruto moved on with his life will he get jealous and try to take that away from him. He is really jealous of Naruto's abilities I wouldn't put it passed him to try something.

This has MPreg, right? How will you swing that with Shikamaru? I assumed Naruto will bear any children since he has Kurama to play fiddle with his anatomy. Does all males have the ability to get pregnant in this AU?

Huum, it was really good even thought it isn't thourough. Nice short story.

So awesome! Shikamaru/Naruto is by far one of my favorite pairings and you totally did it justice. :D

Shikamaru has naughty hormones. :)

This was obviously Kurama's master plan. He can't destroy the Leaf and other nations himself, so he tricked Naruto into mating with Shikamaru to produce a true demon child with their combined potential. :D

I love Iruka's little rant against Jirayai! :D

Pissed off Shikamaru is the hottest! :D

In regards to lack of development, I took it that such happened during their letter sharing. They were writing back and forth for two and half years, and that is plenty of time to develop their relationship. Background development so to say. :)

Damn! Seme!Naruto is incredibly hot. :D

omg please update