that was really Nice! quite hard to read some time for a non English woman like me but nice story!
another sequel of fleurmione maybe?

What a dream! I don't know how to describe it, but I really enjoy to pass through it!

Wow and the thlot pickens... Enjoying this soooo much... 3:44 am and I gotta work my 12 hr shift at hospital. (Nursing station clerk on Psych unit) starting 8:30 am to 9pm. Oh yeah no sleep.

I quite literally bust out laughing by the end of this chapter, poor Fleur, such and awkward situation, but STILL hilarious.

this is great!

I think I will look into Sandman if its concept is similar to this. The characters in the Dreaming that is. :)

You just blew my mind. This chapter was haunting (revisiting Fleur's nightmare) and I did get goosebumps when McGonagall told that the cabin is where the Longbottoms were tortured.
And the possibility of Fleur dreaming a possible future? Speechless.
Some questions were answered but more came. I wonder where we at in both of their dreams; are they together? Hmm...

I know the situation was grim but once they started learning about the spell and assuring and re-assuring it could not have been worse, it did... I just laughed. Oh Fleur, what have you done?
Hope to read more about the consequences of her/their actions , like the significance of the flames Mione casted, the blood magic, etc. :)

So glad I found your stories, and this one was truly inspired. Also a Sandman fan, and you played excellent tribute to Gaimon's style - as if this was an unincluded chapter of Fables and Reflections or similar.

Bravo!

:)

I found that I couldn't really enjoy this story as much as the prequel. I just couldn't feel much for the characters in the Sandman universe. There was also too much fantasy in the story's elements for my liking.

This is such a good story. I have no words to describe how lovely this is, how much you made me cry and oh god I LOVE Death (such a weird thing to write.)

"You get what everyone gets, Fleur. You get a life time."

and the scene with Harry and his parents! Must you do this? Break my heart like that? And Hermione, such a darling, she's hurting so much. Fleur, too. Good thing they are healing now, little by little but healing nonetheless.

Hermione falling in the battle is a horrible thought (thank god J.K Rowling is not G.R.R Martin) and LOL of course their first time is not "normal" by anyone standards and the fact that almost everyone knows. Poor dears.

These two are so in love is freakin' adorable and I am still over the moon with the idea that they share Patronuses (and the fact that Fleur saw that couple of Otters when she was searching the wood for Hermione wand makes it 10x better (though I really want to know if Fleur Patronus is taking the form of Hermione's or if Hermione Patronus is female [Fleur's is he/his]))

Your portrayal of Sandman is beautiful. One of my favorites!

They way you use your words and your descriptions are so pretty. Is so easy to imagine everything and you are an amazing writer.

i have just re-read the previous story and finally got around to read this one. wow. this one confusing, but well written like the first story. thanks for sharing.

Ah, it was my luck that while I'd read The Sandman, it was too long ago to remember much about it, though Morpheus, Death, and Cain Abel are of course impossible to forget. What an interesting fic this was, and a welcome continuing of the story of this set of characters. I'll admit, the parts in the here and now were my favorite, if only because of the older Veela and McGonagall and Pomfrey.

I'm curious, though, the unexpected effects of the spell that Fleur felt, was that because it was Hermione's first too, and her part in lighting the flames involving her in the spell so that they both ended up binding each other, or was it because of Fleur's heretofore secret seer blood?

Oh, gosh, I could barely finish the chapter for my second hand mortification for poor Fleur. Though now I can't stop giggling. Oh, Fleur.

AMAZING!

BRAVO!

Once again a story that absolutely held me from start to end. You have a talent for word craft that really shines through in your building of this story. Please don't let this be your last! I would so love to read your tales of the Vella, Fleur and Hermione and how they work to repair the forest. There's just so much that can be done.

Thank you :)