I loved this story, its the beginning of something absolutely AWESOME!

Really good story! It's creative and unique and full of lots of really neat characters. I really enjoyed how you fleshed out the background of the Kyoshi Warriors, which is something the show really doesn't explore. It's nice to see a story about them! You did a good job with the OCs, and the interactions between the characters are great! The plot was neat and there was a lot of tension and drama to keep me interested. I love how the characters and story line has a lot of depth to it. Can't wait to learn more about them! Hope you'll write more soon! XD

Wow its really good so far :) great job!