Reviews for Somewhere Else and Back Again
Guest chapter 10 . 12/13/2019
Not a fan of kids being hurt ,I just don’t wanna read it,so not my fave chapter because of that
Guest chapter 9 . 12/13/2019
This is pure gold , can’t wait for the others to find out ,I’m so excited for them to get back together
Guest chapter 8 . 12/12/2019
So good!
Guest chapter 2 . 12/12/2019
And we are back , I’m excited
Pikanet128 chapter 28 . 5/31/2019
Kids feel like real kids
And not just composites of there parents

And I like how we go back and forth between worlds
And how you don’t completely abandon the OCs from the school

The line early on where milo complains to nami about her not having to deal with this when she was young
Is totally something that someone that age would say
(My younger brother has said that to my mom)

This story proved to me that straw hat kids could work
And I will now look into more story’s with them now
knightofcool chapter 28 . 7/1/2018
this fic hasnt been touched in years by anybody whos adopted it, is it alright if i try to take a crack at it?
creativesm75 chapter 29 . 6/29/2018
this is nice but i wish that you will leave it up so I can compare it to luna25684's version. if you do take this down then ok...
Guest chapter 10 . 10/12/2015
I've been wondering for a while if his name is pronounced Me-lo or Mi-lo
Vicecreama31 chapter 6 . 9/25/2015
Those kids took the fact of no electronics rather well
BubbleBillie chapter 22 . 3/23/2014
I liked it, but I just want Luffy to find Milo and be all like "OH, MILO! How've you been?" and Nami is all like "We've missed you so much!" and Milo will be all like "Yeah-heh, I have something I need to tell you..." and Nami is like "Uh, what is it?" and Luffy splastered a grin across his face as Milo is all like "Remember Ace, your brother, dad?" and Luffy nods "Well, here's the thing" And he shows them his power and Nami is all like "..." AWKWARDNESS SPREADS AS SILENCE FILLS THE ROOM, NOBODY DARES TO SPEAK A WORD UNTIL ZORO JUST BLINKS AT HIM AND PUTS A HAND ON MILO'S SHOULDER "...how?" and Milo is like "I DON'T FREAKING KNOW!
BubbleBillie chapter 21 . 3/14/2014
Sixteen years later and still eats like a maniac. That's funny. I love the story
BubbleBillie chapter 20 . 3/13/2014
mmmmmmmmMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! WHAT IS THE DEVIL FRUIT CALLED AND WHAT POWER DOES IT GIVE HIM?!
BubbleBillie chapter 19 . 3/9/2014
LOL, but how did Milo get back to that world? it happened again i know, i really shouldn't question it but i cant help it, i loved the story
BubbleBillie chapter 18 . 3/9/2014
wow, lol, nice, i like hearing about Ace, too bad he had to die, i was hoping Sabo was still alive but that wont be happening, i already lost hope within the subject, too bad. He was my favorite if i didn't mention that before, he doesn't get mentioned a lot, all's they know is 'He died when Luffy was Younger' They don't even know what he looks like now, but i think he looked the best when he was younger. He was the cool type, he was always laughing with Luffy when Ace was annoyed with him. I think this one time Ace insulted Luffy on accident or something and then Luffy kind of attacked him, Sabo had to break it up, Ace was Uber annoyed and probably stuck his toung out at Luffy or something, then Luffy nearly attacked him again when Ace kept picking on him but Sabo stopped them from killing each other, Sabo just sat down and laughed when Luffy and Ace were nearly killing each other, close to death, but Sabo didn't mind anymore, he was a careless boy, but cautious. I envy Sabo, he had the perfect life, if Sabo is actually still alive but was just in hiding, i hope he comes to see Luffy again, Luffy tells him what happened to Ace, but Sabo just wants revenge on Luffy for letting Ace die. BUT IT WASN'T LUFFY'S FAULT! Sabo would have never understood Luffy's understanding, i hope he IS still alive, that would be the best present in the world! Nobody can ever understand how i feel right now, i'm nearly crying because i'm afraid that Sabo won't be coming back! D'; THAT MAKES ME SAD!
BubbleBillie chapter 17 . 3/9/2014
lol, LOOL! LOOOOOOOOOOOOOL! I'M LAUGHING SO HARD, I WANT MILO BACK TO NAMI AND LUFFY! And i wanted chopper to be all like "Nami... and luffy... are...? what?" When he found out they are married, it would have been funnier, kinda like what franky did when he was talking with zoro
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