This fic has become an all-out bashfic, with everybody except Cedric and Poppy as horrible people being tormented chapter after chapter - and both Sirius & Remus being bitch-slapped about for no general reason except for Harry to cut ties with everyone he knows for an OC Mary Sue-lite (and that final scene with Sirius was just beating that dead horse like you were the drummer for My Chemical Romance) . At least Luna is fun here - but really, I'm on Chapter 11 and I'm doing it just to know I can finish this Battan death march of a HP fic. You really must loathe the books & secondary characters to beat them down like this.

Susan's charaterisation is all wrong, pretty sure Hannah's is too.

I honestly can't see Sirius abandoning Harry as even in the books you could tell they cared greatly for each other.

Honestly, as enjoyable as this is, the main reason I'm reading is to try and work out who Megan J is. Because I have no idea

I enjoyed reading this however the ending seemed a bit ubupt.

I loved this story so much. Thank you for writing it.

Damn this was a satisfying read.

nnv

Loved it! Thanks for sharing!

I'm still upset about you killing off Sirius! Why?!

Hey man, I saw what you wrote on your profile about all of those idiots that have been criticizing you and your work and I wanted to say that your work has truly inspired me. I started my writing career because of you, and many of your stories, "Losing Control" in particular, are some of my favorite pieces of work on this site. I completely understand why you have stopped writing here, but I just wanted you to know that you've done an amazing job, and given me many days of enjoyment. Thank you!

good

good

Long and original revenge POV story
Thanks for sharing

Awesome.. Liked it.