A most excellent read. Thank you.

Go get him Mac!

love this! You are a wonderful writer.

Did you look up 'Checkov's gun' to write this?

The author mentioned several times that Logan had been seen a therapist over the last five years. Was it massage therapist? All of Logan psychological issues are still there and worse than ever. He has become an insecure possessive controlling emotionally manipulative control freak with no ability to empathize with others pain or feelings.
Girls that might be reading and thinking "I want somebody like Logan to love me. He loves Veronica so much! He is so protective!" That is not how a person supposed to love you. That's how a controlling freak and borderline stalker loves you. People who love you respect you and trust you, and don't attempt to control your every thought and move.

Wow! I just read MacGuffin and this back to back, great stories, great plot!

Okay again another global review :)! I have read this many times :) I love this last chapter a lot :D, it was a much needed break from all the suspense you had through the whole fic :D! I wanted to tell you how great I think this whole universe you created is, I could see it happening as you were describing it :D, I really love it, and I'm glad they all really make it :)! It's a fantastic ending :) for an amazing story, so thank you for writing and posting it and letting all of us to read it :D!

Great story! I didn't realize I hadnt read this sequel. Just started reading vm fic again and read follow the McGuffin again and thought I was going to read this again...but it was brand new to me! It was a treat. Thanks for sharing your stories.

"You don't have to thank family, Logan, it's how we do." - This line has caused me to have my first ever brotp. Really liked their sharing experiences that will help cement them as family.

Loving the Celeste/Jake/Lianne scenes. So much drama, so much subtext, so much subtle digs and bitchiness. Prime!

Yay, so happy with how that resolved.

Meh Duncan should pine after veronica forever hehe

"I'm not particularly in the mood for sex right now."
Best...line...ever!

Great ending, love what happened with Madison - she SO had that coming! Love that they named their little one after Leo, He'll always be watching over his namesake. Can't believe it's ended! What a ride! Hope you do another again soon. Read ya Later ;)

Oh my, you promised ridiculousness and you delivered in spades! Or should I say clover? Nope, wait, that’s me. I’m in clover. This chapter was the best, most ridiculous fun.

At first I was a mite confused but then when the purpose behind the shenanigans was revealed, I’m not sure I’ve ever wanted to reach through the internet and give a writer a high-five more.

“Veronica’s eyes lit with mirth, like there was blood in the water.” Oh. My. This sentence is a perfect summation of character. I have a feeling it’s going to stay with me a while.

Veronica and Celeste doing shots? Only you could come up with a scenario that made this possible.

Your story was so damn good, but also melancholy and downright sad at times. It’s a blast seeing everyone loose, having fun. The Wallace and Veronica banter was so true, and I laughed out loud at Mac’s, “Stop making me look like a I’ve made poor life choices.”

Keith’s calm exasperation at Veronica wrestling in a ruffled party dress had me rolling. Then Alicia horrified? Haha, by now she should know what she’s gotten into.

Aaaannnddd, que the fluffy, yummy smut! Hallo! Thank you for giving me THAT image to take with me tonight!

This story—this series was a triumph. Thank you so much for writing and sharing it with us.