Reviews for Between |
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Allstarall chapter 3 . 9/11/2018 Marriage and parenting. I like your interpretation of their dynamic in a peaceful time. |
Allstarall chapter 2 . 9/11/2018 The non-battle bonds. The hurt and comfort and getting the other to just chill out. Half-way fluff and reminder of a canon support. The hug confused me, but nothing romantic yet. Sure going heading towards marriage tho. |
Allstarall chapter 1 . 9/11/2018 Aww. Cute. The growth of bonds and familiarity though fighting. Some game mechs added. |
Etrinity chapter 3 . 12/26/2016 Loved this fic so much! |
Fanwriter23 chapter 1 . 10/14/2016 Wow that was AWESOME! Great job. Can't wait to get on chapter two but sadly its like 2:30 in the monring so I'll have to wait. That was really awesome nicendecriptive work |
Dolphin02 chapter 3 . 7/22/2016 EEK! This was really touching and cute. And I loved it! :D |
kalmaegi chapter 3 . 6/29/2016 This is short and quiant but satisfying. |
Kangaroo-chan chapter 3 . 7/9/2015 One of the best Chrom/Robin fics for me! |
FenixPhoenix chapter 3 . 12/20/2014 Beautifully written, I enjoyed the short story very much & thank you for it. Your portrayal of the characters felt spot on, and the descriptions had a poetic flow that made them light to read, despite their detail. The only issue (grammar-wise) I noticed was your usage of 'then' when it should have been 'than', but it still didn't detract from the enjoyment. :) |
Flik98 chapter 3 . 4/27/2014 This is just adorable. X3 great story of my ultimate OTP :D |
luigi-dude chapter 1 . 1/5/2014 Your ChromxFeMU stories BY FAR have the most "true to game" personalities for the pair. I love them |
GG chapter 3 . 1/2/2014 So cute 3 loved it. |
Everlastingpassion13 chapter 2 . 7/10/2013 I really, really like how you portray Chrom and Robin in this Fic. Especially the scene after Emmeryn's death. It's so believable and I can even imagine Robin going to support Chrom off-screen in-game (though there was that scene after Chapter 10). I love your portrayal of Chrom and his insecurities surrounding his father, and his insecurities surroundings his vengeance against Gangrel, and how he isn't Emmeryn, because he's not. I think you did an amazing job of keeping him in character but also highlighting some aspects of Chrom that are sort of... glossed over in the game. You writing kill is also unique and beautiful and I really enjoyed reading this story. :) |
perfect chapter 3 . 6/22/2013 This is exactly the type of vindication I was looking for at the ending of Fire Emblem. Great job |
Deader than the Doornail chapter 3 . 6/13/2013 ... Just... Wow. This is an amazing fanfiction! Your writing, which parts of the storyline you worked into it, the emotions, everything. Just... WOW! |