It was good and all but man... why is it making me mad that Zoro and Nami were doing it when they were already not virgins? I guess I wanted them both to be the first to change that.

This story was awesome! If the show had a M rating then this would be a perfect episode becuz this would be Luffy's response. A naked party LMAOOOOO. Just perfect!

The best story of ZoNa i've read so far! Keep up the good work and hope you'll someday write one again

LOL, let's all have a naked party! I appreciate Luffy, but this was good. I feel like I never find really fun or well written stuff on ZoNa or Frobin after the 2 year break period. So, I appreciate it...cause I like the scarred eye:P

The naked party was funny

Bikini bottom tho

It was well written and an interesting read. However, I felt you repeated yourself a little too much during the story. You kept referring to Nami as 'mikan-head' which is fine, but when it happens every time you're talking about her it gets quite repetitive and boring to read. Another thing I couldn't stand was 'man-sword and woman-sheath' there's nothing sexy about either of those words imo and reading it was a turn-off for me.
Apart from that i did enjoy reading it. You have a nice flow and and an interesting idea going on, so thumbs up! Good job

Dude, ur really good at writing, amazing even!

Really Luffy a Naked Party? Bwahahaha!

Love reading well written ZoNa I love how you manage to keep them perfectly in character.

Sweetness and hot! Can't wait for youbto author other M stories based on Zoro and Nami :D

Cheers!

Loved this! This is the first Zoro/Nami story that I have read actually. I really liked them as a couple. Good job! :)

-Yvonne

The ending was so funny! Hahaha baka Luffy ;D

Haha... I like the part when Zoro was doing the skull joke in his mind xD
I think the lemon was good, love the story I'm gonna fave it!

Awesome! So great and well written. I love this pairing. And the lemon is awesome.