This is perfect, in it's heart wrenching-ness.
Louise's voice is superb, and very believable, considering we hardly saw her. I can see her telling herself this.

Oh my gosh, what have you done to me?! This is absolutely fab, very emotional and a lovely insight into how their relationship could be :) xx

I've done it again, I've read your writing in a public place, you would have thought I'd have learnt by now.

This was just so passionate and clever, the dialect made it so real and although we only saw Louise for a few seconds on the doorstep, you've made her just as real as Helen in my head.

I feel so deeply for both of them that it hurts, you're just a wonderful writer.

Aww, what a great fic. I hadn't really given a thought to Louise and how she feels about all this. Really well written too
LBx