Good. Very good. Great even.
I really liked this fanfic, because it showed originality.
But I don't think the Shittinou (did I spell that right?) did give in willingly. I think Beryl forced them to serve her. And in the last arc of the manga, the Sailor Senshi turned evil too, so that's an unfair punishment.

After all these years you could still break hearts. I'm off scouring the Internet for some happy Senshi/Shitennou fanfictions.

what bittersweet fic ..._

but, i love how everything was written :)

Very good writing. I like it.

Although... things like this always leave me feeling as though the Shitennou are painted in fandom as these weak, inherently evil men that deserve to be punished for one mistake. In the manga, during the last season, all of the senshi (every single one) ended up turned evil (JUST like the Shitennou) and tried to kill Serenity...

There is also a place in the manga where the Inner and Outer Senshi give in to the weaknesses in their OWN hearts and start fighting each other... proving without a doubt that the Senshi are as prone to "evil" in their hearts as the Shitennou are... and judging the Shitennou so harsh (as least in fics that are manga-based and take place after the battle with Chaos) is hypocritical and probably more of a personification of their own guilt than it is a true anger at what the Shitennou did to their prince...

And yet, they deserve to be forgiven and continue their lives while the Shitennou "deserve" to live half-lives...

But yeah, those are my thoughts. I still like your writing and wouldn't mind reading more fics by you.

Very well written. I'll definitely be checking out more of your stories.

A great piece of work. Your story is an interesting take on the normal Sailor Moon fandom, and a nice contrast to all the fluffy fics about the shitennou and the senshi coming together. I liked the rapid and direct style you used in your writing, and your way of putting the short chapters in one quick stream without interuptions. It makes the story cut like a knife through the reader's mind. Good job!

–D.M.M.

Very nice! And logical. I don't care that there was no happy ending, I think it was perfect.

Good story. Very well written.

Marvelous. Oh pretty cool and nice. Yay!

Interesting look at things. Very sad, of course.

This was great and sad.

Ouch. Painful, but real.