Holy shit! That was great, I loved the scene that just played in my mind as I read your story! Loved it and keep up the good work. Your writing it most definitely talent ;)

Loved this!

OOFT good story! ;-)

I loved this. Her entire thought process and all the way through was captivating. You wrote her perfectly and I love how at the end he called to her and she was there with him. It wasn't over done but rather perfectly stated. Great job and very well written.

Garrr... *shudders slightly* well worded, descriptive, beautiful, erotic. Loved it. More? Yes please.

Love the surprise ending! You seem to have spent many happy hours studying a certain blue eyed charmer's attributes...sigh.

You are officially my new favourite writer on this site.

That being said, I love how long you can draw out a scene. It's phenomenal!

Felt pretty dirty reading this on the Lord's Day. Totally worth it. Fantastic story!

Brilliant, just brilliant!

nice show he put on

This is absolutely wonderful and lovely. Your ability to paint a perfect picture is well perfect.

You should without a doubt continue writing such tales. I do adore Caryl so. And may have to stumble back over to them now that you have written this.

I really am not a Carol/Daryl shipper ... but the way this was written, it could be applied to any character, real or fictional so I enjoyed it very much! Beautifully written descriptions of Daryl and the scars on his body. Don't be afraid of a little smut! It's good for you! ;-}
You are a wonderfuli writer so by all means ... keep going! *cheers*

Superbly written, wonderful twist, kept me guessing with baited breath. Thank you.

Stumble upon this today and so glad I did. Gorgeous imagery and lovely prose. Thanks for writing.

This was enjoyable but why is this listed as a Mystery?