Reviews for Haze |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Holy shit! That was great, I loved the scene that just played in my mind as I read your story! Loved it and keep up the good work. Your writing it most definitely talent ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this! |
![]() ![]() OOFT good story! ;-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this. Her entire thought process and all the way through was captivating. You wrote her perfectly and I love how at the end he called to her and she was there with him. It wasn't over done but rather perfectly stated. Great job and very well written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Garrr... *shudders slightly* well worded, descriptive, beautiful, erotic. Loved it. More? Yes please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the surprise ending! You seem to have spent many happy hours studying a certain blue eyed charmer's attributes...sigh. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You are officially my new favourite writer on this site. That being said, I love how long you can draw out a scene. It's phenomenal! |
![]() ![]() Felt pretty dirty reading this on the Lord's Day. Totally worth it. Fantastic story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant, just brilliant! |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice show he put on |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is absolutely wonderful and lovely. Your ability to paint a perfect picture is well perfect. You should without a doubt continue writing such tales. I do adore Caryl so. And may have to stumble back over to them now that you have written this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really am not a Carol/Daryl shipper ... but the way this was written, it could be applied to any character, real or fictional so I enjoyed it very much! Beautifully written descriptions of Daryl and the scars on his body. Don't be afraid of a little smut! It's good for you! ;-} You are a wonderfuli writer so by all means ... keep going! *cheers* |
![]() ![]() Superbly written, wonderful twist, kept me guessing with baited breath. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Stumble upon this today and so glad I did. Gorgeous imagery and lovely prose. Thanks for writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was enjoyable but why is this listed as a Mystery? |