Reviews for Cutting Ties |
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cbluna chapter 4 . 3/22/2015 Omg i almost cried when i read you hadbt continued this story... What about your fans? Please please try to finish this |
Guest chapter 4 . 10/21/2014 Good story keep goin :) |
Guest chapter 4 . 8/22/2014 Please don't leave us hanging forever! |
Grace chapter 3 . 8/20/2014 Cool story |
3326freespirit chapter 4 . 2/24/2014 You're a very good writer! I can't wait to see the interaction between Alex and k-unit! Please please update soon! |
Masteroftime chapter 4 . 9/4/2013 Very nice chapter and story overall. The description is very good but the plot seems a bit too cryptic to develop quickly. Perhaps more details on weapons should grant you the edge over other stories, other than that, I think that you can write emotions extremely well. You can possibly weave in a few more contacts that Alex may have gained in his line of work so that not only is he well known but he has people who can assist him across the globe. Other than the update rate, there is nothing bad about this story. Keep up the good work, awaiting your next chapter. |
Lewbot chapter 4 . 8/23/2013 I finally got around to reading this! (Yes, I saved the link you posted to us all weeks ago to come back to later) I really like it, and I'm keeping the link saved for more updates! |
lolxzer chapter 4 . 8/14/2013 This story is just getting better and better. Your english is really good and I love the way you are writing. I think it is amazing how you can build up the tension so good! You rock and I hope you can update soon! |
Owl's Prayer chapter 4 . 8/14/2013 Can't wait for your next update! Very descriptive, and the story is really interesting! I especially liked chapter 2-3 where there were some action in it. Nice way to start a story! |
Owl's Prayer chapter 3 . 8/14/2013 I like the way you end each chapter. Really nice, well written! :D |
graceful-rain chapter 4 . 8/14/2013 What's gona happen next oo I cn't wait |
Owl's Prayer chapter 1 . 8/14/2013 Excellent first chapter, with tension and suspension. Well written! :) I like this story a lot, and the first chapter made a good impression! Hops that your story continues to be well written! (Stories tend to get a bit dull after a while.) it's a great start, really love it! :) |
yashendra2797 chapter 4 . 8/13/2013 man, this story's super awesome. barring a few parts, i cant tell that your first language isn't english! dark, gritty and realistic, i love it! update soon... |
Empty Thoughts chapter 4 . 8/12/2013 Too lazy to login. I'm loving the James and Alex interaction. I hope there's more in the next chapter! Update soon please! |
RugitusAstra chapter 3 . 8/11/2013 This is great! I just read all three chapters, and I hope there will be a fourth, 'cause it's AMAZING. |