Yaay, thanks for the update! Hope you get well soon of whatever afflicts your eyes!

Erza is finally back and of course, and I really should've expected this considering how horny they are, the first thing to is go fuck like crazy. This stuff about Erza being a reincarnation is quite...intriguing (as is the fact that reincarnation is a thing in this world). I'm glad Erza's appearance remained mostly the same. I already forget plenty of times how Luciferona is supposed to look like, don't need another one to keep in mind.
So Natsu created himself a pocket dimension, doesn't matter how you look at it, that's pretty impressive for a barely-out-of-diapers god to do by himself. I'm assuming this Sphere of Inverted Reflections is what those huge valleys of whatever in the Tower of Din are.

I'm looking at Andromeda differently now. Before, she always looked/sounded like some grandiose wise-old lady from millennia ago speaking to these youngsters. In this chapter, however, she sounds and acts a lot more like the teenager she apparently is. I think I like this change.
Pretty sad, though, that she apparently had a fiance that she sort of liked but never even kissed the guy.
"Being nice" most certainly not even close to the gravity field of his intention, but Natsu managing to give her a body where she could eventually live out the life that was stolen from her is cool.
"creation of golems, whose sole purpose is providing sexual services is banned, but actually, among golem-makers, this is the most frequently violated rule ever..." - those freaking filthy degenerates. Not surprising though. Curious by whom, why and how that ban even came to be in the first place.

It's funny how priorities can change. Back when Erza first got her revenge-quest from Andromeda, Natsu wasn't exactly thrilled with the idea of facing Acnologia. Now, with the reemergence of things much worse - the Guardians, Natsu is like "meh, yeah, Acnologia will be dealt with soon". It's a good attitude to have, honestly speaking.

One question: how is Natsu a hypocrite for lying to Gray about what's going on with Mira? I don't follow that one.

Honestly, I'm kinda hyped to see how this Edolas arc of yours is gonna go. What sort of things from this expanded world will be used there (if any). How changed the history of that world will be. Will Edolas even be a parallel world? What will Natsu think about it, and etc. So many questions that I look forward being answered when we get there! :)

You know I'm enjoying the world building almost more than the progression of the story itself. Fantastic last couple of chapters, I'm very glad that I picked up this fic. Keep up the fantastic work!

At first it was kinda difficult to read this fic, but once I got used to the grammar, writing style, and the diverging of the plot (Barely anyone on this site actually changes canon in any meaningful way). This fic is probably my favorite FT fic that I've read so far and I don't say that lightly. You've drastically changed the personalities of the main characters and even completely overhauled Erza's powers and somehow it works. The personality that you've given all the slayer's is great and makes sense. Natsu is arrogant at first because he was raised by a goddess. Same for the dragon slayer's (except for Wendy so far but she's Wendy who hasn't spent enough time around Natsu yet). Anyways fantastic fic so far, I'm honestly surprised that it hasn't gotten more reviews. Keep up the great work!

Well, quite the wealth of information in this one too.
I wouldn't say that this chapter was dark. Desecrating the dead (regardless of what they did in life) is pretty disgusting yes, but Natsu's moral compass has never been all that stellar to begin with so...meh, pragmatism wins the day I guess. What I don't know how to feel about is his idea of dumping Juvia into that machine. Specially considering I wouldn't it past Natsu to do it without explaining stuff or even her express consent...
I do, however, wonder how the beings who fought very hard to topple that damn Tower would feel about someone else using it's dreadful power for themselves...
So...the Tower of Din can, somewhat casually, spit out near-Acnologia level beings, eh? The more you write about the place the more surprised I get that everyone else managed to edge out a win. The more curious I get of this mysterious "Master" too.
Question - Since you changed and added a whole lot to the events of this world, there was none of that time-travel shenanigans, right? Is Zeref still alive and cursed by a god in this? If he is, then where would he stand in the tier totem-pole?
Another question - I refrained from asking in the previous chapter, but does age matters in the whole Magical Avatar Physique's re-origination? As in, could Makarov still do it if he cared to? Could good old Precht/Hades do it?
The more you write this story, the more I feel like you're going to do away with that stupid 7-year timeskip bullshit. It certainly sounds like it would be a terrible thing to happen since we are on a timer now.

I remembered in the earlier chapters how you said Natsu had a partial affinity for lightning magic, I was honestly hoping that he would gain it from the demon this chapter to replace his death frost magic. Also Lucy's read now, so that's a thing. I don't have any particular feelings one way or another about her. Just wish she actually did something for once, great chapter keep up the fantastic work!

Cool story so far

I wonder what’s natsu second domain could be?

Yo Man!

Thanks for the update!

I noticed some mistakes in the grammar and some misspelled words. Also some words need capitalization to further emphasize their presence.

Locking forward to improvements and of course, as always, the next update!

Peace!

Thats whack bro

Well, we got some more solid details on the Tower, so I’m still happy about that!

So, Natsu just pulled a mass grave robbing, zombied them to life, mutilated a massive number to create a monster as powerful as Deliora but too weak to keep in the long run and disposed of the large number of what damned were left, and is thinking over how to do the same with Juvia... I forget, is Natsu the hero or the anti-villain here?

And only Erza’s dragon was an actual dragon? I was wondering how the whole Dragonslayer war and plan work was going to work in this, but that all seems fubar now.

... damn it! I don’t have anything to say “I get it!” about.

finally upadate!

This story is pretty great, and one of my favorite parts is how you seem to follow canon but also make it better at the same time.

Im very interested how you will fit other canon characters into your story, especially the enemies. For example, with Jellal gone (thank you) there cant really be a crime sorciere, which leaves the fate of merudy and ultear either at death or possibly joining fairy tail, that is if the tenrou arc even happens considering how low level grimoire heart is compared the enemies natsu has fought.

I almost think that Natsu would lean towards taking enemies in to fairy tail to bolster the guilds strength for the coming wars, but then again he might just execute them because he doesnt care *.*

I am also pretty interested in how you have made zeref a side villain, and how he will git in to the story, again maybe as an ally lol.

Im not trying to tell you how to write your story i just really like what you have done and its fun thinking how you might do things in the future.

Awesome chapter. The whole thing with the dragons was very interesting and I’m wondering how the slayers will take that information. As always more dump at the end is amazing and this one in particular was quite interesting. I just recently though about gray and his devil slayer magic. Would he need to still undergo Magical Avatar Physique or could he inherit his father’s bloodline with it.

he grammar isn't the best, but you have got me hooked with the story I hope it continues to be great 3

~World Building!~

Based on the affinity list and what you told Rajo, could Cana and Bisca potentially get your personal retconning with have how different theirs are from what they use and their mentioned talent?

I was hoping we’d get more of an origin story on how the Ancient Artifacts came to be.

Hey, Haru’s back! And our MC from another series with spiky hair, had a giant sword that turned small for its super form, and at the end hooked up with the busty bubbly girl with time breaking powers has caught the attention of Nelliel... I get it!
Now to see if they will or won’t get into a solid pairing together, and what that photo shoot would have been like with Mira (and Jenny) potentially there.

Oh, damn. Tower of Dinn is about to get some concrete focus! Edolas is that much farther away, but still; finally!