Reviews for The Wages of Sin
convolutings chapter 4 . 7/27
okay so I know it's been 6 fucking years and i dont know if you forgot about this story or purposefully left it unfinished but I'd greatly appreciate (if you are able) if you'd come back and finish because its absolutely AMAZING! I love your writing this is so fucking good.
GaarahKirai chapter 1 . 12/17/2019
I love this... please finish it
pjn1945 chapter 4 . 12/14/2019
What happened to the next chapter Any chance of you finishing this fantastic story.
missseverina chapter 1 . 12/5/2019
It’s sad that story haven’t finished. Maybe sometime?
Guest chapter 4 . 8/23/2019
Please update... Loving the thrill
Guest chapter 4 . 5/11/2019
This is a great story but where is this HUGE next chapter you promised?Any chance you could finish this even after all this time?
Guest chapter 4 . 5/5/2019
Seriously, where is the supposedly "next chapter"?
It's been 5 years now, you told clues about the fifth chapter like you wrote it but I can't find it anywhere.
You last published in 2016, did you just paused for this fiction ?
Please tell us you are going to finish it..
Btw love the writing and the story
#drivingmecrazy /sobs/
SurrealStrawberry chapter 4 . 3/6/2019
This is a great story, please finish it! I can absolutely see Jane as a cold-hearted bitch who cannot look beyond his own pain. Great writing.
FollowerA chapter 4 . 1/15/2019
I really like your work. Don't suppose you ever finished this story?
Anonimo chapter 4 . 1/14/2018
So what? I just read this and i want the other chapters please!
Guest chapter 4 . 1/7/2018
Where is this HUGE next chapter? I am staying tuned like you requested in your comments at the end of Chapter Four.
Guest chapter 4 . 12/19/2017
Come back and finish this masterpiece
Guest chapter 2 . 11/26/2017
I became a fan of your to this...please complete the series
Jas chapter 4 . 8/13/2017
I love re-reading all your works (and joint works with your sister). But I always forget the devastation when I get to a chapter end and remember the work is still in-progress.

I hope one day you are inspired to finish these pics, but I understand it gets harder and harder to write, especially when a show has finished.

Thanks again for sharing your wonderful words. Know that you always have an audience in me. And The Mentalist fandom is still very much alive (although not as large as it once was), so many others would be grateful to see your return.

Thanks again. xo
Guest chapter 4 . 7/25/2017
I don't understand. It almost sounded like you already had the next chapters written down but you never updated this story again. You even said we were getting somewhere good and you were not going to leave it here. I know life gets in the way sometimes but you did write new stories...
what happened to this one?
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