I had a funny feeling it was red John but thanks for a good read

One helluva twist at the end. Nice.

Wow! What a twist in the story! Gave me the chills while reading the last sentence! Good job! :)

Loved this! Somehow I had a feeling in the beginning it was Red John observing them. The end gave me a little chill. lol.

OK. So I'm reading the summary and I think-" hey ,that's gonna be good to see their relationship from a different perspective"

halfway through the story I'm thinking -" nice. that's a really new way to tell the story"

I reach the end and I think - " MAN! I DID NOT SEE THAT COMING"

Oooh, loved the twist at the end - I had to read it all again to see if I missed any clues - but nothing!
Brilliant!
xx

Wow, this is awesome! At first I just enjoyed looking at Jane and Lisbon through someone else's eyes and I think you did that extremely well, but then the twist at the end! So brilliant. Great story. I hope you write more Mentalist stories soon :)

PLOT TWIST! I feel like I should've expected that, but I'm shocked. Awesome work! Loved it!

That was unexpected! Great Story!

Oh, wow! Loved the twist at the end. Keep more stories like this coming.

This was a fantastic one-shot! You've written in a way that I haven't read before, and I loved observing Jane and Lisbon's relationship from a completely different perspective. Loved it :)

Excellent twist at the end. I did not see that coming at all!

That was fantastic! I didn't see that coming. I kept trying to figure out who it was but I never thought of RJ. I love how he's someone they know and would say hi to - and that a senator would want to talk to. Great job.

omg, either i'm too tired to suspect earlier that this might be RJ himself sitting there or you are just utterly amazing at writing it, or BOTH. the little story is simple but phenomenal (especially the last paragraph)! GREAT JOB! MORE OF IT PLEASE! :D

well I didn't see that coming! I was too caught up in our narrator.

Superbly crafted!