This is well written and agreed story

I would have died of laughter if you made a danny phantom reference and said 'all is as it should be' instead.

superb!~~~~

Actually, her name is Flee

Awesome!

That was very good! I love these type of stories where they view the memories.

BEST FREAKING FANFIC EVER!

I like how you started the story.. I felt sad when I read the line where Tooth was voicing out her questions especially the fact that Jack got turned immortal at a young age and that Manny left him clueless about who he is for 300 years... That's just so sad. TT

*hugs you so hard you can barely breathe*

God I AM LOVING THIS! Iovd stories like these!

Question to anyone who sees this review: Do you believe on the guardians! Because I swear on my life no matter old I get, I'm goong to keep believing in them. And I'll try to knock some sense into anyone who doesn't!

I really liked this. I hope Jack didn't really have to go trough that much mizery in his immortal life. He is too likable and whenever I imagine him being sad my heart breaks. Love your writing. may inspiration be always at your disposal.
Ur fan

Awww! That was a cute story! I was always wondering how the Guardians would react if they knew the truth about Jack... now I know!

This is awesome! I can't wait to read the rewrite.

love the intro ;D