Reviews for Facebook Post |
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soob chapter 1 . 11/20/2017 Cute idea! Make sure to check your grammar 3 I liked it altogether 3/5 |
Alana-kittychan chapter 3 . 5/23/2014 Oh my god too funny and cute |
Thatoneblackchick chapter 2 . 10/28/2013 O_O . boy. |
Thatoneblackchick chapter 1 . 10/28/2013 ;) ahhh smex(yaoi smex*dreamy face*) |
Mireloa chapter 3 . 8/5/2013 awww corny 3 but...i still dont gt the Kenya part lol *confused* |
Mireloa chapter 2 . 8/5/2013 So freakin cuteeeee! ...On to the nxt one! xD xD |
shungiku-chan chapter 3 . 5/10/2013 これは非常に興味深いものです。私もこの考えに物語を書くことを考えた。 As for the review, in Chapter 1, the way you write how will Usami think is correct. Haha, it made me chuckle while reading it. I like chapter 1. In chapter 2, out of character. Miyagi wouldn't force Shinobu to make it just for the sake of them conversing because he has "pride". And also Shinobu is very smart that he wouldn't mistake about using the FB. Chapter 3, Hiroki wouldn't answer of course but "well er we can go but it's not like i want to" because Hiroki is kind of a "tsushun". And the Kenya I don't get it that much, not pretty good with English. この話を書いていただきありがとうございます。 |
SaySaeri chapter 3 . 5/3/2013 lol Nowaki... |
SaySaeri chapter 2 . 4/17/2013 Lol Miyagi... Eh... For Egoist, I guess you could somehow incorporate Akihiko and Junai Egoist XD |
Alana-kittychan chapter 2 . 4/17/2013 Lol cute, heh will Nowaki and Hiroki do Facebook next |
Mireloa chapter 1 . 4/14/2013 Awww tht was soooo cute! Plz do an egoist and terroist! :D |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/12/2013 You should so do the others Facebook fiction also it would be hilarious |
Katia27 chapter 1 . 4/12/2013 I LOVE it! XD This is really funny, I laugh a lot! Poor Misaki, seriously! x) Your fic is really good, please continue! w *Oh, and sorry for my bad english, there may be several errors "" I'm just a french who like read english fic...* I hope you will continue! Bye! |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/11/2013 Loved it! |
SaySaeri chapter 1 . 4/12/2013 Hah, so cute! Yeah, I'd like seeing an egoist and terrorist one. |