Reviews for Birdsong
AikoAkuma chapter 38 . 7/8
You know people can write all the shit they want in the comments but in my opinion for this story being so short with such a basic plot, it was beautifully done.

It didn't feel rushed the characters kinda weren't to OOC and their feelings didn't immediately turn to love/lustful love in 3 to 4 chapters like most stories do, thought what I'm going to complain about is that there were parts where you randomly changed to the past or were in a memory and you didn't wrote a title or anything when that was going to happen so sometimes I would be confused and their daughter being so OP.
aeva elementia chapter 4 . 6/12
You know, on a reread, a lot of the dislike for Madara could've been assuaged by him honestly admitting to being in love with her too at the gates.

Not like every witness would've taken it seriously, but some would have seen through to the truth. Ah well...
aeva elementia chapter 38 . 6/11
Hope they got to enjoy their winter years free from prejudice. This whole work was lovely. Thanks for adding to it after so long.
aeva elementia chapter 35 . 6/11
He needed this wakeup call. His life had to change, and his mindset along with it.
aeva elementia chapter 34 . 6/11
Oh Tobirama. What a question. He deserved her response.
aeva elementia chapter 30 . 6/11
I really wish this had been canon.
aeva elementia chapter 27 . 6/11
Considering that only they know the full story, I can easily see how bad their relationship would look to outsiders.

No one would heed her exclamations about being fine (as the victimised wife) while the squirrelly husband appears more abusive for avoiding exposition on what he rightly considers as private.
aeva elementia chapter 25 . 6/11
He shouldn't have to be used to it, but things were what they were. Ridiculous of them to suggest such things, when a little accommodation on their part could've eased the early problems.
aeva elementia chapter 22 . 6/11
Their concept of entertainment just makes their bigotry clearer.
aeva elementia chapter 21 . 6/11
He takes those insulting brush-offs worse than she does. I suppose knowing she could end everyone therehimself includedincreases the aggravation.
aeva elementia chapter 13 . 6/11
She'll be the death of him
aeva elementia chapter 10 . 6/11
They fistbump? And their baby came out with the jutsu flyingthis fic is the gift that keeps on giving.
aeva elementia chapter 9 . 6/11
I like how quietly he realises that she can be both powerful and domestic. Love these snippets.
Sage Rikudo chapter 36 . 5/14
why do I keep getting update notification when there is no extra chapters and the story is complete?
sandtheory chapter 32 . 5/9
Bravo! This is beautiful. Its nice how you made Uchiha Madara more relatable and human. The way you told the story with the underlying tone of sadness and loss mixed in with the love story made it a masterpiece. Thank you for this! Ever thought of writing one with the Uchiha brothers (Sasuke and Itachi) in it? :3 Stay safe!
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