Awww. This was nice! Haha! You did keep them in character! It was great!

"I want to touch you, too."

Aomine stopped his movement for a moment, contemplating. This night was supposed to be for Kise's enjoyment, for his release. But if Kise said he wanted to reciprocate his actions, who was he to deny the copy master?

lol i love this part, its genius. all in all this fic was just gorgeous and the way you wrote the characters was pretty spot on. it was just really casual and so enjoyable to read.

I think that was awesome :))

sugoiiiii, well typed and I really enjoy the story _

May I request a Fic from you? I really like your writting style _

Loved it! Aomine was so sweet in his own way to Kise :)

That was good! :D

IKYAAAAHHH! OMFG! YOU CUNNING AUTHOR-SAAANN! XD I thought it'd just have a make-out session and I shouldn't read it... but it WAS AoKise, so I had no choice! X3
Hehe! The jerking-off parts were PLEASANTLY surprising ssu! I loved it! Write AoKise smut tooo pweeeaaaaaaasse!

Love AoKise too! U got Kise and Momoi spot-on. Aomine is his usual cool yet proud self. Mayb the sex part would be more realistic if there was some awkwardness. Afterall, it's their first time with other men.
I hate dat Kise always lose to the other GoMs :-( Why can't he ever win?! I guess he is a bit of a crybaby when he loses. But somehow I find it adorable.

Wow this was really good and I am not a big AoKise fan but I really liked this! Great job and keep up the awesome work! :D