Reviews for Bang |
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![]() ![]() Very nicely written. You had the numb, deafened feeling painted beautifully. The emotions portrayed were well done as well. Congrats on a well done piece! Thank you for sharing! It would be interesting to have a prolonged version where a guilt/saddened house (still trying to hide his emotions) looks after her from afar. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh gosh, now THAT was melancholic. Loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely amazing. I adore your style and you've got the characterization so perfect, in my opinion. This is exactly the kind of the internal dialogue I could see her having in this situation. And those ending paragraphs. Goddamn! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ouch! Poor Cameron :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh dear... |
![]() ![]() ![]() aaaaaaaaaaw :) |