OMG, I'm laughing SO hard right now! That ending... they should ditch and go for round 2! :) Oh, my dirty mind...

These two guys xD

Senpai writes very cute, very hot smut. I like how Kise was written in this one C:

Pretty good but it would be even better if you were more detailed during the sex scenes :)

Hehe loved it also the way you ended it was perfect I think! Very good

I love it. One of my favorites! Poor Kise couldn't walk. Aomine planned that! XD

I see... evil master plan to weaken the team, by having sex with Kise, both brilliant and fun ;D

That was absolutel lovely and hot, I live the last part, haha!

hoho
i think the smut is hot n delicious
waiting for the next story :3

Amazing work. I loved everything - especially the end

great! i loved it :)