Reviews for The Throne
Emrys315 chapter 7 . 4/14
I know English isnt your first language, however i suggest you to get a beta when writing a story in a foreign language. I got as far as I could but it is a struggle to keep the flow when I'm correcting word usage every other sentance.
Guest chapter 27 . 5/13/2017
Beautiful ! *A* i love the story sooo much !
Climaxamu34 chapter 1 . 11/17/2014
Even if ur grammar is bad, but ur stories was great! Love the ending! Looking forward for your new stories.
Natsuko457 chapter 6 . 7/21/2014
ok wow... I really like the story but you need to take some time and check wording. Sometimes there are words missing from a sentence or a word is there when it doesn't need to be. It got a little frustrating when I was in the middle of a good part only to pause and try and figure out what was being said or described... Keep up the good work!

NOT A FLAME!
yuzukikuran476 chapter 1 . 7/6/2014
this story is going to be awesome :)
myra k kuran chapter 1 . 1/24/2014
i read your entire story before joining fanfiction. and i loved it..i think you should write more kanamex oc fanfiction.
Lisa chapter 25 . 11/11/2013
i love it!
skylight96 chapter 24 . 11/9/2013
I really like this story...
can't wait for the next update... :D
kawaihana chapter 24 . 11/5/2013
Next chapter please
skywing8 chapter 2 . 11/4/2013
i love it! continue what your doing.
skywing8 chapter 1 . 11/4/2013
i like it
pertains to the story. cool
Guest chapter 21 . 10/20/2013
I LOVE IT! Sweet Hikari x Kaname moments!
kawaihana chapter 21 . 10/20/2013
It's so beautifull.
please continue
Guest chapter 20 . 10/16/2013
Ths deserve a lot more reviews! I LOVE IT! Please update soon.
S chapter 20 . 10/15/2013
Do the next chapter now
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