Reviews for The Throne |
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Emrys315 chapter 7 . 4/14 I know English isnt your first language, however i suggest you to get a beta when writing a story in a foreign language. I got as far as I could but it is a struggle to keep the flow when I'm correcting word usage every other sentance. |
Guest chapter 27 . 5/13/2017 Beautiful ! *A* i love the story sooo much ! |
Climaxamu34 chapter 1 . 11/17/2014 Even if ur grammar is bad, but ur stories was great! Love the ending! Looking forward for your new stories. |
Natsuko457 chapter 6 . 7/21/2014 ok wow... I really like the story but you need to take some time and check wording. Sometimes there are words missing from a sentence or a word is there when it doesn't need to be. It got a little frustrating when I was in the middle of a good part only to pause and try and figure out what was being said or described... Keep up the good work! NOT A FLAME! |
yuzukikuran476 chapter 1 . 7/6/2014 this story is going to be awesome :) |
myra k kuran chapter 1 . 1/24/2014 i read your entire story before joining fanfiction. and i loved it..i think you should write more kanamex oc fanfiction. |
Lisa chapter 25 . 11/11/2013 i love it! |
skylight96 chapter 24 . 11/9/2013 I really like this story... can't wait for the next update... :D |
kawaihana chapter 24 . 11/5/2013 Next chapter please |
skywing8 chapter 2 . 11/4/2013 i love it! continue what your doing. |
skywing8 chapter 1 . 11/4/2013 i like it pertains to the story. cool |
Guest chapter 21 . 10/20/2013 I LOVE IT! Sweet Hikari x Kaname moments! |
kawaihana chapter 21 . 10/20/2013 It's so beautifull. please continue |
Guest chapter 20 . 10/16/2013 Ths deserve a lot more reviews! I LOVE IT! Please update soon. |
S chapter 20 . 10/15/2013 Do the next chapter now |