Reviews for power rangers: the twin factor |
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Guest chapter 4 . 3/26/2016 Please update |
MaeMacIntosh chapter 4 . 10/3/2014 Ok, so I love the idea. I'm so glad that someone FINALLY made the connection between the two! Just one thing...please no script, I like it better when the line ahead doesn't spoil what is to come. Also a wee bit of detail here and there would be useful. Overall I really liked it and I can't wait to read more! |
rain of light chapter 4 . 2/17/2014 awesome do more |
Guest chapter 4 . 2/12/2014 Short, sweet, & simple. Great idea, but a little more detail/story please! I really did like it! Ever thought of doing a sequel? |
litzy.rodriguez.31508 chapter 4 . 7/11/2013 You should write more please! |
Just-another-lonely-fairytale chapter 4 . 6/20/2013 My only critique: Use quotation marks whenever a person is speaking. If Cam and Mia are twins, then shouldn't Mia be the same age Cam was in Ninja Storm (Unless this takes place in some AU where NS and [S]S are in the same time period…) |
Just A Crazy Chick chapter 1 . 4/22/2013 Plzzzzzzzz update soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz i love ur story |
Guest chapter 4 . 4/21/2013 Well you have a good idea for a story, but you are trying to tell it too fast. slow down write longer more detailed chapters and please stop writing in a script format. I look forward to seeing your writing as you improve. |
lizziestrong chapter 3 . 4/21/2013 Wow update soon |
AKA99 chapter 1 . 4/21/2013 'Bout time someone made a story connecting the last names of mia and cam as family |
BlueGem22 chapter 2 . 4/20/2013 They meet Cam. I wonder if they would meet other rangers. Update soon :) |
BlueGem22 chapter 1 . 4/20/2013 Interesting story. Update soon. |