| Reviews for Hiccups with bad timing |
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  Jackson chapter 1 . 9/10/2016 Hi |
 Kendra PJO chapter 1 . 10/8/2014 So funny! The characters are actually IC) |
| Coffee1864 chapter 1 . 9/26/2014 Lol this was so cute and funny, just like one of those not really a big story things but the little moments type of thing. I liked it, and haha we've all had those moments when hiccups or other random little things an drive ya crazier than mr. D could! |
| JasperLover517 chapter 1 . 5/15/2014 Funny and cute at the same time. It's fute or cunny. But seriously it is funny. |
| SmileandWaveBoys chapter 1 . 2/18/2014 It was cute. Very cute! God, I love how you made Leo the one that had the hiccups, it totally worked out that way! And especially love the ending. Everything's better when Leo adds a random JASPER moment. It wrapped everything up in a hilarious way. Nice job! -Penguin |
| Angryhenry chapter 1 . 12/29/2013 That was fun, you could write for a living |
| Dreaming about the Stars chapter 1 . 10/1/2013 Lol that was really funny. I was laughing so hard. That was really good. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/18/2013 I HATE HICCUPS |
| Aqua468 chapter 1 . 6/6/2013 I was kinda hoping that he would hiccup again at the very end... |
| Joy chapter 1 . 4/23/2013 Amazin im speechless write more! |
| the-sleepdeprived chapter 1 . 4/22/2013 I use peanut butter. that always works :) |
| Neverstop13 chapter 1 . 4/21/2013 I loved this! It was really cute and I can definitely see it happening:) |
| PiperandGlimmer chapter 1 . 4/21/2013 3 hahahahaah gotta love leo! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/21/2013 So funny! 3 |
| no-time-to-read chapter 1 . 4/20/2013 haha cute |
