I have no words for this amazing story. You left me pretty much speechless and full of emotion running to and fro.

This is so funny and angsty and caustic but it is fucking awesome. I love the way you write Emma! And I definitely love this fic.

Great story.

Ohh, he was worried about her! That's so sweet!

Writers, PLEASE GIVE US CAPTAIN SWAN!

Haha, great fic! :) Love Hook/Emma and your one-shots are making me anxious to see where season three is going with their relationship:)

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THIS IS AMAZING. Please keep it going. I can totally picture Hook and Emma as they say all of these lines. Bravo!

I really loved this fic. Could you please be a season 3 writer on OUat?

Thanks for sharing. :)

You should totally wrife more for this. It's a really good story

This was HILARIOUS! If I have to ship Emma with someone on the show, it's Hook. I'm a die-hard Gremma shipper who's still holding out hope that he's coming back, but I still loved this. Care to add more?

This one was just as good as your first!
I loved it and I really can imagine this happen in the series.
Hope you write many more Captain Swan stories, your style is amazing!

Loved the two in this ficlet, thanks! :)

Read this on tumblr and had to read it again on here This is just amazing Love, perfection! This need's to happen in the season finale!

Brilliant fanfic; it was so much fun to read! I have been having such a grand time as I read these neverland adventures; I like yours the best! :) I do hope that you will continue writing more! I loved Emma's reaction to hearing that Hook was worried about her! I also adored the part where Hook admits that he probably would let Charming behead him if something happened to Emma!

I also loved this part:
"I was worried about you!"

Emma stops at that, stares at him. Hook looks like he wants nothing more than to crawl into a hole and die.

Emma means to say she doesn't need him worrying about her, she doesn't need anybody; she's managed without family or friends for 28 years, what's one day more. Instead, what comes out of her mouth is

"You were?"

in that stupid little voice she's only ever used with Neal, or Graham, or Henry, or Snow or David.

Hook coughs to clear his throat, avoiding eye contact.

"Well, your charming father would have me beheaded should something happen to the little princess," he answers, voice filled with fake cheer.

Emma sighs, drops her gaze to the ground, lets him work. Hook's shoulders sag, in resignation or defeat.

"And I would probably let him."

They don't say anything else after that.

I don't have a tumblr account and so would it be okay if I prompted you here?
Pairing: Emma/Killian Type: UST (Unresolved Sexual Tension) Prompt: Unsettling Realizations, misadventures with cliffs involved? Hook hears about the time that Emma was held captive by the Mad Hatter? Rating: T

Ok. I'm normally not one for Swan/Hook, but damn. This was. Pretty good. I would like to see more.