| Reviews for Damned |
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   Magic-Saphira chapter 11 . 8/2 A very good story, but indeed the grammar can be better. I mean this in the best way possible, but the biggest issue is the fact that you often mistake he, his and him for female and she, her and hers for male. He, his and him are for the males. She, her and hers are for the female. So for example: Isabella runs her vingers through his hair. He moves his hand over her side. Again I mean this in a good way. Maybe you can take somebody up on the offer to let them beta your story. If you want of course! |
| B34chGr1 chapter 1 . 3/15 regardless of the spelling and grammar mistakes. which considering English is not your first language is forgivable. this was a really good story. great plot and story arch. |
| Lovely Black Butterfly chapter 11 . 10/28/2019 it is a very good story however the gender tenses are not correct as well as some of the verb tenses. I would be happy to help you edit them. |
| Lovely Black Butterfly chapter 2 . 10/28/2019 I see this story was just completed 1 yr ago. will you allow me to beta your story? clean up your translation verb congregation and gender tense? |
| Taylor eaglebear chapter 11 . 10/16/2019 The only good thing I can think of them being fugitives is that they are basically untouchable with both of there gifts and fighting abilities they can live an almost normal life. |
| monay9e chapter 11 . 7/8/2019 Loved it! |
| Babysis64 chapter 11 . 3/13/2019 sweet story I thought. wow so they wanted them to stay longer so they set Demetri up to hear bad talk about Bella, not good at all. I hope that they leave them alone to their happiness. Also Edward leave her alone. She just wants Demetri can't he get that through his head. Thank you for sharing what you did with us. |
| Babysis64 chapter 3 . 3/13/2019 oh I sure hope everything turns out well for Demetri and Bella right. They seem to hit it off well. |
| Babysis64 chapter 2 . 3/13/2019 oh my this was a good chapter as well. Wow so Demetri and Bella. So I take it they are going to be companions and not true mates or are they? I guess we will find out by reading more into your story. |
| Babysis64 chapter 1 . 3/13/2019 wow this was a different first chapter of a story, but I enjoyed reading it. Glad that Demetri helped Bella plan for an animal attack, so her dad would get closure, and not look for her. |
| Taylor eaglebear chapter 9 . 3/7/2019 that was funny |
| DarkVamp18 chapter 3 . 3/1/2019 Almost all the time you wrote his it is meant to be her. |
| kya4652 chapter 2 . 2/5/2019 Hi I take it that English is your second language as the are so grammar mistakes. would to like me to beta read for you? |
| silversimon chapter 11 . 12/15/2018 Thanks for returning to finish your story! Enjoyed it very much. |
| Sassyvampmama chapter 11 . 12/10/2018 Thank you for sharing. |
