Wow...just wow. Yea that's all I got. Amazing doesn't quite give it justice

You did a great job with this story! Love it

Oh my. Wow. This is truly a magnificent piece of work. Bravo. Bravo.

That was really good :D

That was very enjoyable to read, thanks for uploading and sharing this story!

I really liked how it started so totally unexpected, really I didn't see Fang's "attack" on Lightning coming in chapter one, and yeah it felt all a bit shocking and at the same time sad as well, I was genuinely sorry for Fang there. And then afterwards, as the atmosphere got more romantic, I couldn't help but be happy for Light and Fang, that was just nice to see everything work out for them! Also, I must add that I think you did a great job with the "sexy scenes" as well.

Keep up the good work :)

Whoa...Just - whoa.
Awesome and hot! You had me twisting in my seat, haha. I love how things go from potentially disastrous and messy to passionate and romantic. I'm definitely looking forward to more from you! :)

Its good! Keep going :-)

whew...its hot in here somebody open a window!

"Luce", eh? Is that Pulsian for "Light"? ;)