Reviews for The Exiles'
Wolf Treetruck chapter 10 . 8/22
Why do Riven's breasts need to get bigger?
Wolf Treetruck chapter 8 . 8/21
I am now positive that you play LoL, even without reading the descriptions at bottom. Riven, I immediately wondered, but Caitlyn Piltover and Katarina, you have clear inspiration.
molmeal chapter 11 . 7/3
I fucking love this series though a sad that its not continued
The conmanw chapter 4 . 3/26
To be fair when we all read the books we where more focused on Percy Jackson himself and not how the gods acted
The conmanw chapter 11 . 2/13
I imagine riven as Ashe from overwatch
Guest chapter 11 . 1/24
It's been 4 years, and this is probably wishful thinking, but please revive it! This is one of my favorite fics out there. If you can't work on it, maybe have someone adopt it.
I Are Panda chapter 3 . 11/22/2019
lol
Simi Zor-El chapter 1 . 11/17/2019
I sincerely hope you continue this story. I enjoy it a great deal.

To the critics:
1. If you have actually read the series or researched the Greek/Roman pantheon you would know that Zeus and a large number of Demigods are far from nice guys.
2. I have read this story several times, it is not besmirching the Male Gender. It is besmirching specific males (who are jerks to put it kid friendly), arrogance, and pointing out the very real sexist behaviour of the males of the Greek/Roman pantheon.
3. You do see a bit of struggle for Riven to adjust to going from Male to Female.
victorsan12345 chapter 8 . 10/27/2019
At least you mentioned that good men exist in this chapter though that is partially the problem, you tell it but don't show it and all men I read about seem to be trash.

Finally, this chapter confirmed Percy's fate and I can say that I'm pretty annoyed. Practically death of identity. And almost a twisted acknowledgment that he is somehow better as a woman.
It's just, the personal identity of someone can not be so easily changed. Even Riven thinking of herself as 'her' is something unbelievable.
victorsan12345 chapter 7 . 10/27/2019
I have noted something about your stories but... Do you have to constantly besmirch the male gender?
Is not just in this story even.
When Artemis admitted to being wrong in her attitude I hoped to see something different but...

And Riven adapting to quickly to her situation, it just so completely unbelievable.
Honestly, would they ever love her if she became Percy again?
victorsan12345 chapter 2 . 10/27/2019
Really? Did you have to make Zeus such a terrible person?

I just began reason this and it appear discontinued but I will ask anyway.
Do you plan (or planned) to turn Percy back into a guy? I just seem very cruel to trap him in a body he should clearly hate, and I don't believe for even a second that even after years living as a girl, if given the opportunity, he wouldn't change back. I imagine he could adapt to the change but realistically he would merely manage that and I doubt he would even stop wishing to change back.
Also, with the whole 'I wouldn't spread my legs for any man' from Artemis I actually would like to see if she could swallow her pride and love Percy as the man he is and supposedly love.
Honestly, leaving him as a girl would be practically an acknowledgment that she was right in doing what she did. And it isn't. At all.
Even if she were not to feel attraction toward the male form why should Percy be the one to adapt to her wishes when he clearly is the victim.

Sorry for the rant but I genuinely see it as something impossible for Percy to ever be happy with the change.
Hikari Nova chapter 1 . 9/17/2019
revive and update this please
IAmCover chapter 11 . 7/27/2019
I hope you return to this story
Wandclaw321 chapter 11 . 2/1/2019
Looking forward to a update
a chapter 1 . 1/31/2019
at first, i thought the fates were saying TETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETE and it was some sort of evil laughter or something
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