Dartz: "what no, this is not how the oricalcimilos is supposed to work! It's supposed to put the saouls on my wall not turn them into pownese, lavathuan have you been liyang to my this hole time?"

Seriously good job tho

I love this story. There have been a number of MLP/Yugioh! crossovers but yours is the only one to get it right. Please, don't let this masterpiece remain in limbo.

Hello there,

First of all, I'm really enjoying your story so far. As I read on, I am more and more intrigued about Yugi's integration with the pony society. However, there is one thing that's bugging me – your uses of your thous, thys, and thees. Quick grammar note: they all mean "you" singular, but in different ways. thou is used as the subject, i.e. thou art Yugi (you are Yugi). Thee is an object, i.e. I have something for thee (I have something for you). Thy is possessive, i.e. Thy name is Yugi (your name is Yugi). When addressing more than one person, the speaker uses the word you and yours as we would normally today. When talking about oneself, a person would use me, my, mine, and so forth. So Yugi saying "thy name is Yugi" makes no sense, because you're actually making him say "your name is Yugi" to Luna, not "my name is Yugi." I realize you may be beyond this story and you may have picked this up somewhere between now and since you last updated, but it's something that I find worth fixing, if you can. Other than that, I look forward to seeing how it unfolds.
Best,
Galacticexplorer12

Very well done. Can't wait for the next chapter (if there is one). Keep up the good work

Awesome

I love this fanfiction and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

update the next chapter please

Please continue

Good chapter

OMFG MAH TWO FAV THINGS!

So cute.

This is too cool!

This is a great story!

Good chapter

Please continue! This is awesome! AND YOU FINALLY UPDATED! YAY! This updating makes my day brighter! Hope to see another chapter when you're able to post it! *grin* You're an awesome writer!